Globalization is bringing world together of single culture, but the irony is that people are getting away from their extended family such as grandparents, uncles and aunts etc. They have very less importance in their life. Sometimes, it can by choice or may due to migration for work purposes. Mostly due to independent lifestyle. even vast circle of friends to cater emotional and social needs.
To begin with, people leave their family for job purposes. They usually get settled in new city or even in new country. Initially, they visit their family quite often then, it becomes single vist a yea...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 332, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...s. Mostly due to independent lifestyle. even vast circle of friends to cater emotion...
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Line 3, column 668, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[4]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...ensive tickets. My children do not even know him or my cousins. So, eventually the e...
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Line 3, column 726, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sins. So, eventually the extended family us become less important to them than th...
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Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: are
...ther priorities. Furthermore, people are are now independent than they were in past....
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
... are are now independent than they were in past. Earlier people has to depend on their ...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...take care of their grand children. They use to take them school, tell stories keep ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in general, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84738041002 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45160081644 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512528473804 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2731081437 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8148148148 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2592592593 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15601386239 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047877646051 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777787672105 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865056397807 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440080531832 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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