As far as I have watched, there are so many movies shocked me from the main idea of them. Also, I learned a lot about the countries where the movies were made.Among all of these movies I have viewed, I believe the american movies taught me much. Here is the review of these movies.
To begin with, the spirit of struggling for life is the most striking point that the american movies attract me. I was not shocked when I watched the most popular TV series Prison Break when I was in the university, as the memory of the film shawshank's redemption was so impressive that I was deeply contained by the heroes' spirit. He was accused by some bad guy as the murderer of his wife while he was actually not. In prison he struggled for the unfair life, then he escaped from the prison by digging his own room inch by inch. The heavy rain after his escaping from the tunnel of the prison was the symbol of the film. Meanwhile, this important moment was the classic scence that encouraged me to fight for the tough life.
In addition, as a multicultural country, the movies made in the US also taught me that people should open the mind to embrace the world. The first time when I watch the movie Kungfu Panda was so unforggetable that I can not believe that there were so many genuine Chinese traditional elements in this Disney movie. A group of american people, perhaps with some help of Chinese, produced a cartoon movie with such high standard. The most striking aspect was the actors thought was was derived from the Yi Jing, a book writen by Laozi two thousand years ago. When I was in high school I found it was hard to learn this book as a Chinese. Let alone the Americans. What's more, the conflict fighting scenery with the fluent Tai Chi form the cute panda gave me a deep impression as I still can not believe the Disney could make Kongfu so attractive in cartoon.
Finally, there are many american movies have the main idea that the family comes first. This is another point I learn from the movies. As due to the development of China, the Chinese people were affected by western culture form many cases. Some traditional virtues were abandoned by the youth especially the family attitude. In that some of the young people in China wanted to have their own style in life, If young couples have a tough life, they wanted to divorced immediately. While they show no resposibility to the family. Thus I learn a lot from the US movies, there were happy-endings in most of the movies I watched which emphasized the families' imporatance.
In all, I learned a lot from the american movies , with not only the native accent, but also the useful issues could guide my life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, so, still, then, thus, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52783505155 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39483898672 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486597938144 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4657771452 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2083333333 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04166666667 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205735274803 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575800035324 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672294636176 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133827618513 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738255593554 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.