Films can tell us a lot about in which they were made what have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response.
I support this idea that films can tell us a lot about where they made and we learned about countries from watching their movies. I have able to identify the types of films that they produce by countries. In my opinion, films give information about the countries where we couldn’t visit before in our lives.
sculptures, and statues which are belonged to one country,
the face of people and color of skin, the brand of automobiles and cars, the lifestyle and method of living, behaviors, and characters of people who live in that country,
History, and culture of people, traditional foods and dresses ritual, religious, etc.
First of all, I believe that films can show history and culture and art in countries which are different and specific in countries, then we can know where and this film made.
Second, I have watched films to increase my knowledge and information about countries such as characters and manners, religious, art and architecture, technology and science. We can watch several films in different genres, such as the genre of the family we can learn a lot about the relationship between parents and children and how they can spend their time together. For instance, in one film family want to go road trip which I have never known before that a road trip is a great opportunity to spend time as a family.
Third, on the one hand, films have been able to show a lot of historical events that happened in some places in the world which is useful for learning about the history of a country, however, these historical documents are not accepted by people who live in these countries. I have been always learning a lot of things from watching. I think that lots of information such as history, war, revolution, industrialization, agriculture, are shown by films. Then people can learn a lot from countries where they even didn’t visit before.
In conclusion, some of the most important points come into my mind including, history and culture, history and events, and also information about countries that I have been able to meet from movies. If it produced in a foreign country, I would realize that it’s original from another country. In that case, I have learned lots of things from films.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sculptures
...ldn't visit before in our lives. sculptures, and statues which are belonged to one ...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atues which are belonged to one country, the face of people and color of skin, th...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ters of people who live in that country, History, and culture of people, traditio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, third, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91842105263 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.735347517 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463157894737 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.6303483101 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.6 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378635595308 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14091842147 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105400461414 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151820904521 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124775698216 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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