In my view the most important and enjoyable place in my country is disney land. There are a lot of fun there in addition to that they will see the disney characters. it's really nice place due to the following points.
First of all , it's huge area with a lot of different things, when i was young i was going there to take pictures with the characters that i saw them in the television, i was so excited when i took pictures with Mickey mouse who is the favorite character to me.
Second; it contains amazing rides and shows,and very beautiful animal shows.I remembered that when we were going there , we had a map and schedule time for each show, furthermore it's the place for kids and adults so the whole family can go and enjoy together.
Last but not least, there is a big resting area , restaurants, shops, restrooms. It is mixing the happiness and relaxes, they are using very beautiful lights, and at the last hour of this day,we can watch the nicest fire works ever.
In conclusion, if a foreign visitor has only one day i will recommend a disney land to him. Because it has a lot of rides, shows, characters moreover if they are want to get rest there are a lot of beautiful restaurants and shops. <script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
- TPO 26 Agree Disagree It s better for children choose jobs that are similar to their parent jobs than to choose job that are very different from their parents jobs 60
- Do you agree or disagree that learning through concepts is better than learning through facts? 50
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- People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer. 60
- Integrated essay suggested in TPO9 80
it's really nice place
it's really a nice place
it's huge area
it's a huge area
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