Friends should be at the same finance level
Nowadays, money is the most significant factor in our life because without money you are not able to live properly. Some people thinks that money has an effect on our friendship therefore friends should be at the same finance level. From my point of view, friends should have similar situation in economic issues since they can understand each other better and they can rely on each other as well. My arguments for these points are explained as follows.
First, if you have a friend who has a same condition in finance issues like you, you will feel comfortable. For example, you may like to go to zoo and the cost of the ticket of the zoo is 50 dollars so if your friend can afford to buy a ticket you can go to zoo and have a joyful time. However, if you had a poor friend you certainly could not go to the zoo. In addition, usually people who are in the same level of finance, they have same opinion. In other words, if you be a rich man and have a wealthy friend, you will think like each other. For instance, if you go to the shop in order to buy a T-shirt your manners and your friend manners will be the same since both of you will undoubtedly try to buy an unique T-shirt that is expensive than other shirts.
Second, friends who are in the same level of finance can rely on each other therefore they can have a good relationship with each other. To give an example, if your friend ask you to borrow money to him you will accept it because you are sure that your friends do not want to deceive you and after several days he will return his debt. Furthermore, if you have a reliable and rich friend you are able to establish a new business and earn more money. Actually, you may think that you cannot start a new business independently but if you have a reliable friend you can establish a huge company easily with assist of him.
All in all, from what I have discussed above, these days, money is the key factor in our life. Actually, without money no one can have a great life. Under this condition, some people believe that we should have a friendship with a person who his economic circumstances are like our condition in economic matters. In my opinion, if people have a friend that has a same level of finance like them, they can have a great relationship because not only can they comprehend each other in the best way, but also they are able to trust each other without any concern.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 708, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...both of you will undoubtedly try to buy an unique T-shirt that is expensive than o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35333333333 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31530068975 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415555555556 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5894602223 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.833333333 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236034704917 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966227629989 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12120253903 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16897214202 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653786966728 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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