In general people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon.
A few years ago, people used to live a short period of time. They died at younger ages. Within the past of the time, individuals last more and mortality has decreased. In general people are living longer than before. In the following essay, I will discuss the phenomenon that has brought as a consequence this being happen now.
First, many studies have shown that before there was not exist the development that exist today. For example, nowadays when people get sick they have a great number of medicines to be treated. The hospitals have the equipment needed to diagnose patients. Also, science has achieved many goals discovering the solutions to many of disease, until reduce the number of them. For instance, last year my uncle was diagnosed with lung cancer. His doctor told him that he will be fine as soon as he started his medication. Thanks to the development of the science and the techniques to diagnose on time his disease my uncle will be able to last more time as the family expected.
Second, a long time ago people had to work really tough, without any development on their tools. Nowadays they work hard but they have their own comfort. For example, if they have to cut the grass of the yard, they use a sophisticated machine that will not let them get tired. Besides, people do not walk long distances until get exhausted. They use autos to transport themselves. People has improved the methods of work. As a result, their period of life is longer because they do not wear out as it used to be a long time ago.
Finally, I would like to mention that thanks to the development of technology and improving of the science people are living longer now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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...s a consequence this being happen now. First, many studies have shown that befo...
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Suggestion: existed
...es have shown that before there was not exist the development that exist today. For e...
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...last more time as the family expected. Second, a long time ago people had to wo...
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... out as it used to be a long time ago. Finally, I would like to mention that th...
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...ience people are living longer now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, really, second, so, for example, for instance, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66891891892 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45164149479 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0119096788 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193566188381 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641919801083 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103651098148 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167731009971 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139287566226 0.0645574589148 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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