People are the only life who most conscious of his/her longevity. people always try to find out the best preparedness to live long and conscious about how to keep human health well. This attitude of people always strengthen with time and it helps to live longer. There are a few reasons for people living longer.
Firstly, Day by day The world has been changing with time. Advancement of the medical system has thrived with time
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: saramhl
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ho most conscious of his/her longevity. people always try to find out the best prepare...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 43.0788530466 9% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 52.1666666667 25% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 355.0 1977.66487455 18% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 75.0 407.700716846 18% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.94283095638 4.48103885553 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32535779804 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 53.0 212.727598566 25% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706666666667 0.524837075471 135% => OK
syllable_count: 107.1 618.680645161 17% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.2086069402 48.9658058833 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.1666666667 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171747946783 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953190544228 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10087111903 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107375205758 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107375205758 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 86.8835125448 18% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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