In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
If death is a finish line, that line has continually moved farther and farther away over the past century. It means that the newer generation is living, on the average, more than the past generations. I believe that several factors have led to these longer life-spans of the new generation. This essay will explore some of the aforementioned factors.
The first reason why people live longer now is that they are more concerned about their health. Thanks to the higher education availability, widespread Internet and of course media, the new generation is more clued-up about healthy diets and considerable effects of a sport-based lifestyle. On the other hand, various healthy food types provided on the shelves of shopping centers and different sporting equipment for all sorts of bodies with diverse tastes and body goals are a gift of the recent century to people who want not only to be healthy but also happy. Therefore, people these days, pay more attention to their lifestyle and as a result, they have healthier bodies with fewer diseases.
To distinguish how it is possible for people to have longer life-spans, the second reason is that medical sciences have improved a lot over the past century. In the past, people would suffer and die from a huge number of diseases which have already been eradicated. Besides, keeping to personal hygiene have become more necessary in new dense societies and this makes individuals less prone to different diseases. In fact, development of technology and consequently the medical devices, variation and higher quality of drugs, the better understanding of body organs and tracts and the way they work and plenty of other reasons join together to give people a higher quality of life.
On the whole, in the century of cutting-edge science and technology with lots of new offers for a healthier and more peaceful life as well as advanced medical cares for distinct types of illnesses, where scientists are trying to find super extended life-span or even elixir of immortality, this is not impossible for people to live longer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...new generation. This essay will explore some of the aforementioned factors. The first reas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, in fact, of course, as a result, as well as, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0583090379 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70814567336 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.1781871172 48.9658058833 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.461538462 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 5.45110844103 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147747625242 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553056604892 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564651094004 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852049991428 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178232521944 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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