According to me, the statement made by author is correct in a way. There are three things which had considered effect on human health and body. Technology, Media and developments in research of science. Awareness of good health has increased life span of average human being.
First of all, I would like to start with research in science. Unlike 5 decades back, people are trying to do more research on the life saving drugs. Life threatening disease like cancer,now can be cured if it is in an early stage. Now a days so many drugs have been developed to treat harmful diseases like Diabetics, Spo...
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