A gift can contribute to a child's development. What gift would you give to help a child development?
Childhood is among the most outstanding aspects of everyone's life in that one can seek their interests and favors in it and follow it. In my opinion, an intelligent and lovely gift plays an absolutely essential role in child's development. I incline to give a camera to a child for some reason, in what follows I am going to aptly delve to the most paramount reasons to substantiate my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mention is that, with the advent of modern technology and state-of-the-art advanced facilities, modern camera can plays a vital role in promoting the child's knowledge and increasing dramatically their creativity. Practically, our children today enjoy the virtues of high advanced facilities, which let them communicate more with their surrounding in a convenient manner. Moreover, photography can boost the children's mind in varied grounds, and they can recognize the potential abilities more and more.
Another privilege of the camera has to do with the general education about job future that one can benefit from it. The experiencing photography of children can familiar them with some of job opportunities that they may encounter with them in the future. In addition, children will learn the practical experience that it remains in their mind forever.
In summary, with all this taken to account, I do believe that a camera rather is the ideal choose for child's development on the ground that it can help to upbringing of children in creativity manner; also, children can familiar with an astonishing job: photography. This eye-catching gift could be a turning point in everyone's life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'essential'.
Suggestion: essential
...an intelligent and lovely gift plays an absolutely essential role in childs development. I incline t...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'play'
Suggestion: play
... advanced facilities, modern camera can plays a vital role in promoting the childs kn...
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Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a convenient manner" with adverb for "convenient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...communicate more with their surrounding in a convenient manner. Moreover, photography can boost the ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, as to, in addition, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19245283019 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00728911561 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558490566038 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3856030553 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.090909091 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192698711287 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676548651784 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056450419068 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117667406757 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671671886731 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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