The government can take a variety of actions to help protect the environment. Which one of the following do you think is the most important for the nation’s government to take to protect the environment?
1. Fund the research to develop environmentally friendly energy sources such as
solar and wind energy.
2. Preserve the natural places like forests and protect the animals that live there
3. Enforce laws to prevent the pollution of air
Since mankind’s creation, human activities always have had some negative effects on the environment. Thus, nowadays, most governments have been decided to set new policies in order to protect the environment. Although there are many different strategies to protect nature and the Earth, some people may believe that governments should fund the researches to develop environmentally friendly energy sources such as solar and wind energy, and give sound reasons to assert their opinion; however, others may have the opposite view and choose other policies like preserving the natural places and animals or enforcing laws to inhibit air pollution. As far as I am concerned, I believe governments should support green technologies and clean energy resources because of several reasons. In what follows, to assert my point of view, I will elaborate on two of which.
The first and foremost reason that comes to my mind is carbon emission is going to kill us gradually by global warming. In other words, due to human activities, particularly since the appearance of industrial revolution and technology advancements, fossil fuel consumption has been increased and it means more carbon and other greenhouse gases have been emitted to the atmosphere, today, it gives rise to global warming by the greenhouse effect. According to the scientific features released by environmental researches, forest fires, glacier melting, harsh droughts have been jumped in the last 50 years because of temperature rise. As a result, governments should restrict the high carbon emission industries by replacing fossil fuels with carbon-free energy resources such as wind and solar energy or other sources of clean energies.
The second point that I would like to put my finger on is despite the fact that the extraction of fossil fuels has some unavoidable negative effects on the environment and animal habitats, utilizing renewable energies are less destructive and pollutant. For instance, to extract a new coal stone mine, you should spend a lot of money in order to locate a new mine; besides, lots of things are needed such as cut the trees to build a road, excavation apparatuses and machines, exploding tools, and construction materials. Each of which, will destroy the ecosystem and also will cause serious damages to nature and the environment, on the other hand, you can use solar photo-voltaic cells in order to produce electricity or thermal solar collectors to use sun’s heat everywhere you want such as your house roof or yard. Therefore, air and water pollution will be decreased by using these kinds of energy sources.
To make a long story short, zero carbon emission technologies and energy sources will inhibit the temperature rising and also helps solve the global warming issue. Furthermore, the drawbacks of utilizing renewable against the disadvantages of fossil fuel extraction can be neglected. With all these taken into account, as we have only one Earth, it is highly recommended that governments should invest more finance sources to develop green technologies and clean energies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2604.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31428571429 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88786976047 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55306122449 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 815.4 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.9970803362 48.9658058833 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.75 100.406767564 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.625 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 5.45110844103 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141586324428 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431098324109 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437330627693 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824278874597 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509133088456 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 58.1214874552 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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