The government can take a variety of actions to help protect the environment. Which one of the following do you think is the most important for the nation’s government to take to protect the environment?
1. Fund research to develop environmentally friendly energy sources such as solar and wind energy.
2. Preserve the natural places like forests and protect the animals that live there.
3. Enforce laws to prevent the pollution of air and water by large companies.
Throughout the history, the human and wide range of animal has utilized various natural resources due to several purposes. Not surprisingly that these limited sources are running out in recent decades owing to overuse of them. Therefore, it is human's turn that plays its role in order to protect the environment. There are varied approaches which can be applied, but I am of the opinion that, one of the most efficient solutions is regulating the rules that control people's behaviors and lead to change their attitude toward this fundamental issue. So, the following explanation will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, protecting the environment is basic mindset that should be implemented in society. Undoubtedly, in some countries people are already familiar with this concept, although, they may not pay enough attention to it. But, public awareness is the top matter of concern for many governors, and that is why they have concluded having some regulations is a primary step to familiarize the citizens with the extent of importance of preserving the environment. Furthermore, when people do not commit specific action as the laws have banned them, it gradually becomes integral part of their behavior, and the next generation will learn that this is not appropriate treatment. As a result, the children will do correct manner spontaneously, and they will convey the massage of caring the environment to their child. Gradually, the wrong conduct will disappear.
Another crucial fact that should be taken into consideration is that people are always looking for the convenience and benefit. Admittedly, the human will not do the right deed in many cases unless something enforce him. The overwhelmed majority of people know that earth is deal with serious problem because of too much usage of fossil fuels, but why they overlook this truth? The answer has two responses. the first group are the one who does not want to abandon their old habit and have tendency to keep their wrong beliefs, and the second one are the beneficiary crowd who earn considerable amount of financial income. Both of these people should be reinforce to obey specific rule and stop their behavior.
On the basis of the point, mentioned above, I am convinced that setting some bills will have influential effects. Because the rules not only give necessary information to individuals but also make them to start new lifestyle with innovate mindset.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'as a result', 'in many cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20728929385 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.173120728929 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100227790433 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0546697038724 0.046263068375 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0455580865604 0.0685040099705 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100227790433 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0410022779043 0.0351676179071 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75386512688 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0273348519362 0.0309702414327 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00227790432802 0.00188951952338 121% => OK
Determiners: 0.102505694761 0.0887237588012 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0273348519362 0.0209618222197 130% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0227790432802 0.0139019557991 164% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2461.0 2387.08602151 103% => OK
No of words: 398.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.18341708543 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376884422111 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28391959799 0.251872472559 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201005025126 0.174417080927 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150753768844 0.112833075102 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75386512688 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608040201005 0.524397521467 116% => OK
Word variations: 74.9867283215 59.2087087015 127% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9473684211 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7479710264 48.84282405 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.526315789 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 49.33932822 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.275 1.45489161554 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492162172144 0.300154397459 164% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0635332744534 0.103427244359 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0541150792433 0.0752933317313 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.482323512972 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140992156098 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196348107938 0.114077575197 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945792511634 0.0781384742642 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.447285535518 0.336927656856 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.12020670604 0.067059652881 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.368122739661 0.210909579961 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574514809432 0.0618886996521 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.