Today, education is a very important part of each person. The government tries to build enough universities for educating young people. In my city, a new university can also be built sometime. There are some advantages and disadvantages of this process.
First of all, university in any locality increases the economy in diverse ways. It will attract many new shops and malls near it, which not only eases the living, but also provides lots of job opportunities for the people living there. Moreover, it will attract students from different regions of nation as well as students of different cultures. This attributes in increasing the exposure for both boarding people as well as visiting people. Though it is tough, initially, to establish certain seminal reforms, eventually these establishments will uplift the standard of the soceity. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About an year ago, the economy of my region had been improved drastically after the opening of an international graduate school in my locality. It had an significant effect on the life style of the people living in that area by creating many jobs and increased income flow. Similarly, life of many people has become easier in various ways since the arrival of the institution.
Secondly, every university provides neighbourhood with a perquisite to the play ground and other amneties. Children from nearby households could play in those grounds provided by the big university. However, access into college might depend on the administration, still it might be useful even if the allowance is granted for a particular period. Likewise, many elders could utilise these amneties for walking or jogging in the morning, thereby improving their health. It could also have an inspiring effect on the students in the neighbourhood in many ways. For example, students in the surrounding areas might perfom well in their studies. On one hand, it could provide an opportunity to play by providing space. It could also bring in many companies along with them.
In conclusion, buidling a new university mostly has advantages with relatively less disadvantages. It improves the standards of the locality in an exponential manner. Employement rises along with the life style. An establishment of such an institution would have many unintended improvements too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... is a compelling example of this. About an year ago, the economy of my region had ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... graduate school in my locality. It had an significant effect on the life style of...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun disadvantages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Consider replacing "in an exponential manner" with adverb for "exponential"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... improves the standards of the locality in an exponential manner. Employement rises along with the life ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28609625668 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97892283225 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6974194533 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.08 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.96 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.96 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130209838802 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036545382282 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453429521415 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939614849647 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550651416035 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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