What is supposed to make up the overall quality of our lives? Many people attach great importance to lifestyle and eating habits. In order to handle with these issues, authority has stepped into these areas. Some people reckon that the government has done enough to appeal to the masses to live healthier lives. However, I hardly concur with this opinion and what I state can be substantiated as follows.
Admittedly, the government has spared no effort to propose lots of motions to educate the public about a healthier way of life. To illustrate, every year, the government distributes a large amount of money to make propaganda videos about the deficiencies about unhealthy life, such as smoking, and build diversified infrastructures, such as gyms, sports fields and other facilities beneficial to public health. With these resources, citizens are enabled to make full use of the to build their body and enjoy themselves. Especially, since COVID-19 is still spreading all over the world, the government pays long-lasting attention to public hygiene and instruct people familiarize themselves with some basic medical knowledge and understanding.
However, it is undeniable that the government can do more for the public. Nowadays, society and companies still value work efficiency and urge employees to improve their productivity. They even take advantage of various advanced multimedia applications and software to monitor the employees. Just because the government has proposed some suggestions to reinforce people’s awareness of living a balanced life does not mean the companies will follow the advice and give great priority to employees’ mental and physical health. For example, in China, many workers still work longer than 8 hours a day. Nevertheless, their leaders are indifferent to their situations and even fire them because of the unfinished work. We all know that high-salary work is always associated with high risk and hard work, but we also need to cherish the value of life. Thus, it is high time for the government to make stricter rules and ensure the implementation.
Moreover, an unhealthy lifestyle affects not only our personal life but also the fundamental function of our society, even the whole world. It is also advisable for the government to mobilize more power to help people establish healthier life since one government of a country cannot manage the issue alone. To illustrate, the government of one country can communicate with other countries to make some worldwide solutions to address some earnest concerns of the people. They can cooperate with each other to build a stronger wall to grapple with some illnesses and unhealthy lifestyle detrimental to worldwide public health. Moreover, the government of each county can also do favor for scientists to promote international communication and collaboration in order to eliminate unhealthy lifestyles and eating habits efficiently. That’s nowadays what government still lacks.
With the reference to the arguments above, although the government has lots of achievements that constitute a steppingstone for the future development, there is still a long way for it to go. I believe with the sizzling development of society, officials in the government will definitely utilize their wits to tackle the present and potential challenges and problems regarding public happiness and health.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement All scientific discoveries should be shared among all scientists all around the world governments and businesses should not keep any discoveries secret 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The ability to write well is more important than that of speaking? 80
- Many organizations try to draw people s attention to serious problems such as climate change or poverty These organizations often use images photographs and videos to motivate people to take action against those problems Some organizations use sad images 81
- Many organizations try to draw people s attention to serious problems such as climate change or poverty These organizations often use images photographs and videos to motivate people to take action against those problems Some organizations use sad images 80
- Many organizations try to draw people s attention to serious problems such as climate change or poverty These organizations often use images photographs and videos to motivate people to take action against those problems Some organizations use sad images 81
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2864.0 1977.66487455 145% => OK
No of words: 528.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42424242424 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99875624662 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 898.2 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5531039667 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.56 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.12 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20624648057 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559544725005 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702747768312 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108455643966 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577304175121 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 86.8835125448 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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