the government should give fund for space travel or space exploration
Travel has an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is vitally important to take time off our chores and work to get rid of the stress and built up the tension of our stressful lives by traveling to new places in order to entertain ourselves. Moreover, people who like adventures, they will choose to conduct a journey to space due to a whim or for scientific reasons. Therefore, I believe that the government should allocate money in order to facilitate touring in a space due to its benefits in both of improving our information and preserving the mental health. In the following paragraphs, I will explain my opinion more clearly.
To begin with, it is critical to instill the concrete basis of learning from an early age and then apply what we learn practically. Indeed, the most mysterious field to study is the space because even we can know a myriad amount of information about it, we still can not watch that life due to the difficulty in reaching it. For instance, when I was at the middle school, they taught us about the merits, meteorites and many other astronomical things, I was really fascinated in learning more and more and fond in watching them closely, but, all the facilities that found at that time is only the telescope. Furthermore, after a few years, there was an opportunity to travel to the moon, I registered for that and I took the adventure not to prove that I am brave but because that tour helped me to gain a vast array of knowledge that had a potential to broaden my horizon and increased my intellectual ability. Hence, I wish that the government will place more effort to build a space station or airport to make it accessible and affordable for everyone want to improve the information. In contrast, the exploration can be done from the earth by using the new technological development and innovations that happen within the contemporary era which has a spectacular breakthrough many spheres such as the astronomy. Consequently, the government should have the obligation to spend most of the fund to enhance the travel to space because of its the way that people can seek to carve out more knowledge.
To sum up, education and learning are the cornerstones of societies, the government should surge people to harvest and grape the solutions about many puzzles question regarding space through providing them the ability to travel there in order to enhance what they did learn in the learning institutes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1442, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... enhance the travel to space because of its the way that people can seek to carve o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in contrast, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80705882353 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.842923589 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7202887618 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.153846154 100.406767564 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6923076923 20.6045352989 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1538461538 5.45110844103 260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276778566915 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088806025381 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781558159649 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180416376065 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232716430246 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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