If the government is somewhat underfunded economically, which part or two of the city could be cut? Reduce the redundancy of personnel in the city hall; Replace the plants that require frequent maintenance in the park lawn with plants that do not require frequent care to reduce costs in this area.
To save budget of the government, it is more resonable to replace the plants that require frequent maintenance in the park lawn to plants that does not require frequent care. Reducing the workers might result more reduction on actual cost, the consequence might be more calamity than replacing plants. Since people who work with the government is a potential buyers, laying off these workers might result in secondary damage. Moreover, the government have to consider after they lay off the workers, since the total amount of work does not change. Furthermore, even after the budget problem has solved, the government have to hire the workers since this kind of system cannot maintain for long time. Albeit to the negative part of laying off workers, replacing plants to easier caring does not harm its first objective, which is decorating the park. On to that, lower maintainance fee leads to saving budget permenantly. Therefore, it is more reasonable to change plants.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 360, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'buyer'?
Suggestion: buyer
...work with the government is a potential buyers, laying off these workers might result ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, second, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 1977.66487455 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 407.700716846 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11320754717 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.48103885553 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58681011421 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 212.727598566 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 618.680645161 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9903834298 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.625 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201297121341 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798191721889 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109687301914 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201297121341 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 360, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'buyer'?
Suggestion: buyer
...work with the government is a potential buyers, laying off these workers might result ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, second, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 1977.66487455 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 407.700716846 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11320754717 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.48103885553 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58681011421 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 212.727598566 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 618.680645161 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9903834298 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.625 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201297121341 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798191721889 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109687301914 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201297121341 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.