The current challenges facing traditional teacher training have caused government to search for alternatives. I believe online workshop can be a win-win solution.
First off, the online training program ensures better quality control. If a select few teachers receive training first and then pass on to hometown peers, the government would run the risk of compromising results. They may have a great trainer to start with, but there’s no guarantee that the trainees can do the equally good job delivering what they’ve learned. Let’s assume the government hires several trainers specializing in respective fields, such as pedagogical theories, multimedia presentation, interaction skills and so forth. Ideally, trainees would take notes, imitate the model and retell lectures to peers at home. But the fact is, trainees can hardly rely on a short-period session to master what the trainers have accumulated over years of practice. Since the trainees themselves are still a work in progress, they would probably misinterpret certain points and end up presenting the content in an inaccurate way. Online workshop, on the other hand, offers standardized content with skillful trainers across the sessions, so participant won’t have to make do with the second best. This makes it possible for every teacher participant to enjoy the first-hand learning experience. So E-learning allows government to create a standardized procedure and consistency in the delivery of content.
Another benefit of online education is its accessibility and flexibility. Live learning events require that those who participate align their schedules to the training calendar. Online courses, however, give teachers the opportunity to plan their study time around the rest of their workday, instead of the other way around. They no longer have to fight traffic, find parking spaces, and leave work early to go to class or miss important family time. All of this makes online learning a good option for working professionals who need to balance their work and family commitments. Besides, teachers can study when their energy is at peak, whether that’s early in the morning or late at night. This makes it possible for teachers to learn at their own pace and in comfortable settings. Such flexibility can beat any physical class sessions.
Lastly, online programs can be a more practical option from a funding prospective. If government is responsible for physical training sessions, there would be corresponding costs: trainer and trainee commute, infrastructure rentals, utility bills and documentation costs. However, online learning has no such thing to account for. For example, there are no commuting costs, and also there is no required course material such as textbooks because those are often available for free online. Plus, the return on investment for creating an online training for teachers is much higher. With all the software tools available including slideshow and screen capture software that can record computer activities, participants can download it to their own computer and access it later for viewing. As the percentage of the tech-savvy millennials rise in the workforce, the reliance on E-learning tools maximizes learning results.
All in all, online training programs can produce better results, guarantee user satisfaction as well as bring down the costs.
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 83
- The government wants to improve the education of high school, and there are two plans：1 choose a group of good teachers and train them first, and after that let them go back to schools and train other teachers.2 provide training for every teacher online 95
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. 58
- To understand the most imporant characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. 75
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts 88
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Message: Consider replacing "in an inaccurate way" with adverb for "inaccurate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'such as', 'as well as', 'to start with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26622296173 0.229887763892 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.136439267887 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103161397671 0.0866891130778 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0482529118136 0.046263068375 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0316139767055 0.0685040099705 46% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0948419301165 0.118717715034 80% => OK
Participles: 0.026622296173 0.0351676179071 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93323071981 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0282861896839 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00499168053245 0.00188951952338 264% => OK
Determiners: 0.0931780366057 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0232945091514 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0116472545757 0.0139019557991 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3392.0 2387.08602151 142% => OK
No of words: 520.0 408.028673835 127% => OK
Chars per words: 6.52307692308 5.86048508987 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.444230769231 0.338922669872 131% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.351923076923 0.251872472559 140% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.275 0.174417080927 158% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155769230769 0.112833075102 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93323071981 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 296.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 72.4919014388 59.2087087015 122% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5714285714 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.915963528 48.84282405 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.142857143 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 53.7637362637 45.7405998639 118% => OK
Elegance: 1.79230769231 1.45489161554 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410116000755 0.300154397459 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0791576595884 0.103427244359 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0582936521761 0.0752933317313 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.443338627058 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148774195022 0.151897553556 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129010924297 0.114077575197 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600375013624 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.281636615769 0.336927656856 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0744079869617 0.067059652881 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224472311743 0.210909579961 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112166420766 0.0618886996521 181% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.6433691756 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.