Has the ease of cooking improved life?
Yes, it has. As an analogy, the essential of eating to us, is the same as essential of fuel to car. We need to supply enough energy by eating healthy foods. Cooking is one of the important phenomena in human’s life that its role is indispensable. There are some reasons to describe why cooking industry and foods have helped betterment process of life:
First of all, in comparison with past decades or past centuries, the earth planet's population has grown up today. Improving hygienic facilities and living level is one reason. According to some academic researches, development of cooking can be the other reason. Invention of stove, discovering new ingredients and making new foods with less cost, lead to ease of accessibility to food. On the other word, preparing a healthy and useful food has been accelerated by those technologies.
At the second place, cooking has been introduced as an industry. Competition makes anything and any business more enjoyable and gives costumers more services on behalf of owner of companies. There are some races among different companies, such as producing new ingredients with lower price, developing of semi-cooked foods etc. These issues have made cooking easier than it was and as a final conclusion, easier cooking leads to more free time to doing other tasks and thereby improving life.
Ease of cooking has turned men to being chef. For instance, a man who has to work far away of his wife, should cook himself; There are many cousins on the internet and variety of cousin books that can help the man with delicious foods. So starving is not an obstacle to making money and these facilities are conducive to better life. The mentioned issue is true about college students too. Easy cooking improves quality of life for who lives at other place and there is no one like mother to serve food.
To be honest, easy cooking is an agent in forming healthier society than past. I mean, food's quality is increased as well as progression of cooking appliances. Easy cooking is not only fast and accessible one but also is healthier and reliable matter. In spite of ascending rate of population, easy cooking makes it possible that factories and restaurants suffice for serving enough food.
All in all, it has been entrenched in the authorities' mentality that if we are to have active community, we have to improve cooking industry that involves easy cooking too. Were it not for easy cooking, many people and students would not able to be present at their job or universities. Regarding contents of this essay, cooking is a profession that potentiates our diary and living abilities admittedly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authorities'' or 'authority's'?
Suggestion: authorities'; authority's
...l in all, it has been entrenched in the authorities mentality that if we are to have active...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, so, well, as to, for instance, i mean, such as, as well as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95720720721 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72008953212 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6622588395 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.04 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.76 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362741860673 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891881054209 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806721565209 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183248338162 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581128807639 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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