Has technology made the world a better place to live?
Technology is the best gift that human ever invented. It becomes our necessity and inseparable things in our life as we heavily depend on it to fulfill our simpliest task. So I believe that technology makes our life easier to live and why I feel this I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin, due to advanced technological innovation, we will not have to worry about simple and time consuming task. Nowadays, people use different home appliances to perform their daily activities like washing dishes, clothing, paying the bills of the electricity, etc. While mechanization carry the arduous task in a second without draining our energy.
Secondly, improved health facilities help us to enjoy our life as we less likely to bear the risk of our health. In constrast, past life was full of misery as they have to lose their life even with simple disease. They had to live their life full of trepediation and unable to live freely. I have to admit that today's people live in utopia as they are going to be cured despite they diagonised with the fatal disease.
Lastly, as social creature, human strive to be around their relatives to get compassion and share their emotion, and technology make it possible to bridge close this void even their thousand miles apart. Today's many people have to go far from their close ones due to search for employment, study and other cause. Gladly, scietific invention of the internet, mobile and other electronic device really great help to see their desired people.
To sum up, I think that the rapid human inventions have become savior for us to live our life of fullest. This is because that it makes human life easy to carry out, entertaining and less risky.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll explore in the following paragraphs. To begin, due to advanced technological ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, while, i feel, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85034013605 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54278034265 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581632653061 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6548494112 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0666666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0897836481079 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036958206175 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461313190489 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519124377146 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266979460784 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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