In holidays shop must be closed or open
Nowadays business notion is jumping in leaps and bounds which only provokes the benefits according to its way. In the virtue of rendering conveniences, business persons are very fervent to grab the lump sum of profits by hook or crook. But monotonous business works demand to be standstill which is called leisure. Conversely, in consideration of capturing customers furtively, in the holiday shop should be open according to my personal opinion.
To embark on, all academic, official people remain free on the weekend day. Basically, in the onset of leisure, they plan how they enjoy the whole day with their own accord. More or fewer people are earnest to travel a museum, a park or intend to go to the market because of shopping. So if the market is closed in this day, they will lose their keenness to go outside. More precisely it is said that in such case those who are a market lover, they have to only fantasize of marketing. What I mean by this is that it will be favorable to them not to tread their legs in the market. Consequently, market owners will feel a deficiency of their unique customer. Moreover, we know that this type of customer is instinctive to make the market, so from them, it will be easy to make a profit in the eye of policy. Which is why I think, on the weekend day if shops are kept open, the more the profit will get the seller; the more take fantasy the customer. From my personal experience, I have a weekend day which shows me a way of marketing. The last couple of days ago, I went to a market, but so discombobulated not to find the most of the portion open. In result, I could not buy my sumptuous zinc and new brand shirt. In reality, I barely get a chance to go to the shop, so I have not yet bought my desired shirt.
In addition, in the unavoidable cases, we feel the advantages of keeping the shop open. Whenever a lot of people keep themselves in the room, there is a huge chance to be accidentally ill or any sinister works. Besides people can face any hazardous accident in this day that invariably demands a free road, doctor etc. Mostly we feel the need for a pharmacist, but all shops are closed. For example, My grandfather became ill on a weekend and we could not get any pharmacy open to take medicine. That's why it is far better to keep the shop open on the holiday.
Finally, if the shop is not open in off day, all roads seem empty. There is no minimum of hustle and bustle. If we want to travel a museum or park, it will not only cumbersome but also our endeavors will be nipped in the bud. Moreover empty and desolate places are very bothering to the mind of tender people. That's why they don't go outside; just enjoy merriment in keeping themselves constrained in the room. More often than not this scenario spoils their mobility to enjoy life and they only fantasize to take snacks in a restaurant.
To wrap it up, it will be favorable for the sellers and buyers to keep the shop open. Moreover, the surrounding atmosphere will face a great impact on lifestyle.
Nowadays business notion is jumping in leaps and bounds which only provokes the benefits according to its way. In the virtue of rendering conveniences, business persons are very fervent to grab the lump sum of profits by hook or crook. But monotonous business works demand to be standstill which is called leisure. Conversely, in consideration of capturing customers furtively, in the holiday shop should be open according to my personal opinion.
To embark on, all academic, official people remain free on the weekend day. Basically, in the onset of leisure, they plan how they enjoy the whole day with their own accord. More or fewer people are earnest to travel a museum, a park or intend to go to the market because of shopping. So if the market is closed in this day, they will lose their keenness to go outside. More precisely it is said that in such case those who are a market lover, they have to only fantasize of marketing. What I mean by this is that it will be favorable to them not to tread their legs in the market. Consequently, market owners will feel a deficiency of their unique customer. Moreover, we know that this type of customer is instinctive to make the market, so from them, it will be easy to make a profit in the eye of policy. Which is why I think, on the weekend day if shops are kept open, the more the profit will get the seller; the more take fantasy the customer. From my personal experience, I have a weekend day which shows me a way of marketing. The last couple of days ago, I went to a market, but so discombobulated not to find the most of the portion open. In result, I could not buy my sumptuous zinc and new brand shirt. In reality, I barely get a chance to go to the shop, so I have not yet bought my desired shirt.
In addition, in the unavoidable cases, we feel the advantages of keeping the shop open. Whenever a lot of people keep themselves in the room, there is a huge chance to be accidentally ill or any sinister works. Besides people can face any hazardous accident in this day that invariably demands a free road, doctor etc. Mostly we feel the need for a pharmacist, but all shops are closed. For example, My grandfather became ill on a weekend and we could not get any pharmacy open to take medicine. That's why it is far better to keep the shop open on the holiday.
Finally, if the shop is not open in off day, all roads seem empty. There is no minimum of hustle and bustle. If we want to travel a museum or park, it will not only cumbersome but also our endeavors will be nipped in the bud. Moreover empty and desolate places are very bothering to the mind of tender people. That's why they don't go outside; just enjoy merriment in keeping themselves constrained in the room. More often than not this scenario spoils their mobility to enjoy life and they only fantasize to take snacks in a restaurant.
To wrap it up, it will be favorable for the sellers and buyers to keep the shop open. Moreover, the surrounding atmosphere will face a great impact on lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 430, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...day shop should be open according to my personal opinion. To embark on, all academic, official...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...have not yet bought my desired shirt. In addition, in the unavoidable cases, we ...
^^
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...accidentally ill or any sinister works. Besides people can face any hazardous accident ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...get any pharmacy open to take medicine. Thats why it is far better to keep the shop o...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ur endeavors will be nipped in the bud. Moreover empty and desolate places are very both...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...bothering to the mind of tender people. Thats why they dont go outside; just enjoy me...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 325, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e mind of tender people. Thats why they dont go outside; just enjoy merriment in kee...
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Line 6, column 429, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...day shop should be open according to my personal opinion. To embark on, all academic, official...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...have not yet bought my desired shirt. In addition, in the unavoidable cases, we ...
^^
Line 8, column 212, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...accidentally ill or any sinister works. Besides people can face any hazardous accident ...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 497, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...get any pharmacy open to take medicine. Thats why it is far better to keep the shop o...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 226, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ur endeavors will be nipped in the bud. Moreover empty and desolate places are very both...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 310, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...bothering to the mind of tender people. Thats why they dont go outside; just enjoy me...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 325, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e mind of tender people. Thats why they dont go outside; just enjoy merriment in kee...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, conversely, finally, if, moreover, so, still, for example, i mean, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 48.0 15.1003584229 318% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 9.8082437276 285% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 34.0 13.8261648746 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 104.0 43.0788530466 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 158.0 52.1666666667 303% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4942.0 1977.66487455 250% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1112.0 407.700716846 273% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44424460432 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.77465704619 4.48103885553 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5544349284 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.241007194245 0.524837075471 46% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1582.2 618.680645161 256% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 26.0 4.94265232975 526% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 62.0 20.6003584229 301% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7482643207 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.7096774194 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.935483871 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95161290323 5.45110844103 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 38.0 11.8709677419 320% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225814855671 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595920223277 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818920282134 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141367937262 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455036979491 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.1 8.01818996416 76% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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