homeschooling
Education is a vital element of children's development. Nowadays parents are allowed to choose
either teach a child at home or sent him/her to public school. Both choices have pros and cons, but in
my opinion, attending public school is a better choice for a student then a homeschooling for two reasons.
First reason is that benefits of homeschooling cannot be overlooked. Students have flexible
timetable and individual approach taking into account special needs of a child. Parents or tutors can
adjust method of delivering information and pay attention to topics that student cannot understand.
Also, it is known that information obtained in quite environment without any pressure or noise is easy
to understand and memories. Moreover, children in homeschools will not have a bad experience of bulling and unhealthy competition.
Second reason is that human beings are social beings and children learn from peers and adult how
to cope with the social issues. Modern educational curriculum pays lots of attention on developing social
and emotional skills. Facing with good and bad examples of behavior children learn what is good and
bad and this play crucial role in personal establishment. Also, schools have facilities for extra activities
such as sport and art that can help develop child's talents and interests. In addition, school friend are usually become long life friends.
In conclusion, parents want to make the best choice for their children, and the method of
education is the curtail one. So all benefits and drawbacks should be taken into account. But in my
opinion, public schools are the perfect place for harmonious development of a child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34456928839 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81132986088 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621722846442 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6770814415 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.1875 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.53405017921 353% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110736025672 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041230548302 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088866803756 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0388256380369 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813096052451 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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