How do movies and television influence people’s behavior? Use specific reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Undoubtedly, in our modern societies, the media have a profound impact on our lives so much so that the big advertisement companies have been formed. No one can turn a blind eye to the profound effect of Television, as well as its attractive programs, on our daily lives. There is a spirited controversy as to whether one should limit some programs as well as the time allocated to television or not. Some people may take the view that it is better to neglect the negative impacts of television programs, but others do not think so. However, the influence of this ingenious innovation on people’s behavior can be categorized into two separated cluster. In the following paragraphs, I will try to pinpoint the merits and demerits of the media.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that television play a vital, positive role in quite a few aspects of our lives, namely education, information, entertainment, to name but a few. By the help of television, education can be spreaded throughout the world, and, even, the people in the most far-off regions can be benefited from advantages of this creative invention. With keeping this in mind, proper and well-organized programs can have a significant impact on the promotion of our children. In some countries, there are some specific channels for children which raise the sense of creativity of children through appropriate programs. In addition, television can be a good source of information to such extent that it is the only source of news for some people. After the advent of television, the last news from all over the world can be diffused in in a blink of an eye. Todays, people have to decide on the base of information. For instance, if a family decide to go to the beach in weekend, they would need to be informed about the weather, and by doing so, television is a genuine source of information needed for this deciding. Last but not least, another advantage of this creation is its amazing entertainments. There are diverse programs in TV which can hold you and your family front of the television for a long time. These programs not only can entertain you for some hours but also can release you from different stressful matters.
Looking at the dark side of this issue, one can also find the negative aspects of media on people’s behavior, especially on children’s behavior, among which violence and health are the most controversial problems. Statics have shown that teenagers who see action movies can commit aggressive behavior in some cases. Thus, in the future, these children can demonstrate offensive actions than the others who are not subject to these movies. Consequently, it can result in an aggressive society in the future. Additionally, another demerits of television is its harmful effects on our health. To be more specific, television can reduce the activities of people, and increase of the possibility of the heart attacking. In addition, with its attractive advertisement, television can intrigue you towards greasy food which is one source of controversy in all over the world.
In sum up, television and its program have own advantages and disadvantages. In this regard, people should be aware of the proper using of media. In my own view, children should be trained to exploit the television programs properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Suggestion: clusters
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...from all over the world can be diffused in in a blink of an eye. Todays, people have ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... be aware of the proper using of media. In my own view, children should be trained...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, in addition, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2777.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 554.0 407.700716846 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01263537906 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85151570047 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97732451806 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496389891697 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 876.6 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 4.94265232975 344% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1993380958 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.851851852 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5185185185 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85185185185 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134496609811 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384232695682 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383931412663 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088110481338 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132843382488 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 86.8835125448 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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