As a human being population is largely increase, there is decreasing in the land used to endanger animals, the question is whether the land should save to provide human needs or for saving animals, this can be weighed from many aspects. In my perceptive, I concur that the land should be used to save animals instead of building houses or factories, In the following paragraph I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
First, and foremost, due to the advance in technology, especially in agriculture field in these days, this enable us to use a small area to build a longitudinal design which provide a lot of apartments, for example Burige Khlifa, which is concidering as a long building that contains more than hundred stores with many departments in contrast to the animals which can not live without lands, becuase they use the field for living and prerying.
Second, there is iterconnectionn between the animals, the absence of a suiitible habitats will effect the animals, and this will effect the other types of animals by effecting food chain, more over human being will effect by change due to the deficiency in the food sources, as you can see the importance of providing a good habitats for animals to protect them from extinction in addition, keep a good food supply for another animals and for people.
To sum up, the statement that provide land for saving animals is as persuasive as it stands, this is mainly due to expositions that mentioned above. Keeping land for saving animals is very important to prevent their extinction.
As a human being population is largely increase, there is decreasing in the land used to endanger animals, the question is whether the land should save to provide human needs or for saving animals, this can be weighed from many aspects. In my perceptive, I concur that the land should be used to save animals instead of building houses or factories, In the following paragraph I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
First, and foremost, due to the advance in technology, especially in agriculture field in these days, this enable us to use a small area to build a longitudinal design which provide a lot of apartments, for example Burige Khlifa, which is concidering as a long building that contains more than hundred stores with many departments in contrast to the animals which can not live without lands, becuase they use the field for living and prerying.
Second, there is iterconnectionn between the animals, the absence of a suiitible habitats will effect the animals, and this will effect the other types of animals by effecting food chain, more over human being will effect by change due to the deficiency in the food sources, as you can see the importance of providing a good habitats for animals to protect them from extinction in addition, keep a good food supply for another animals and for people.
To sum up, the statement that provide land for saving animals is as persuasive as it stands, this is mainly due to expositions that mentioned above. Keeping land for saving animals is very important to prevent their extinction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 268.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88059701493 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70807106989 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533582089552 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.1344086022 219% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.682167392 48.9658058833 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.0 100.406767564 217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.6666666667 20.6045352989 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5 5.45110844103 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.508387016964 0.236089414692 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.271399233944 0.076458572812 355% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190028032371 0.0737576698707 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302265357851 0.150856017488 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.214709222751 0.0645574589148 333% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 11.7677419355 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.1575268817 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.0537634409 195% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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