If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Throughout history, in all civilized societies, selecting a right job engendered copious controversies among people. Some people may hold the view that a secure job is essential for people. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that an appealing job is vital for human. As far as I am concerned, people should choose a secure job because not only can they progress, but also it helps them to obtain experience.
The first reason worth mentioning is that people can progress in their life. Nowadays, the development in the technology happening in a very fast pace and it is crucial to have a secure job to make progress in life. To demonstrate, finding job is very arduous and challenging. If a person have a chance to take a job, should accept it because it might never happen again. Hence, by taking a job you can make money and enjoy your life. Also, after a while you learn a job perfectly, you can looking for better situation for yourself or maybe, your boss suggest you a better position and higher salary in company. Therefore, it helps you to make a better life and enhance your life.
A further subtle point is that a secure job helps you to obtain experience. To illustrate, start a job is very hard and many people have doubt about it. When you take a secure job, you can learn a job perfectly and increase your knowledge and get experiences. For instance, when an engineer want to design building, he needs to completely learn the work. Furthermore, he decide to get a secure job in a building firm and after that he gain experiences and learn all the work, starting his firm and work by himself. Moreover, an educated person that obtain experiences, can use this knowledge in other area or pass this knowledge to other like his child and by this way help them.
To make a long story short, based on aforementioned argument, due to progress in life and enjoy life, people prefer to choose a secure job rather than an appealing job. Consequently, it is highly recommended that, when people have an opportunity for taking a secure job, without no hesitate, accept it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 490, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'look'
Suggestion: look
...hile you learn a job perfectly, you can looking for better situation for yourself or ma...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decides'.
Suggestion: decides
...pletely learn the work. Furthermore, he decide to get a secure job in a building firm ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6846361186 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68412729674 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498652291105 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9644096344 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4736842105 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5263157895 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349477239153 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121926443708 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714983376691 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238843488181 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054786353007 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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