If you could invent something new, what product would you develop?
In today's hectic world, in which life has trials and tribulations all people around the globe looking for better life. People have different point of view about lifestyle regarding the trends of modern life. In fact. The plethora of people try hard to enjoy their life. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether what kind of new invention can be helpful in the world. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that one of the most significant invention in which can patronize people in their life could have be the robots. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that nowadays vast majorities of people in all corners of the world confront various difficulties and hardly ever can they progress with presence of obstacles. Scientifically speaking, many people have to devote their time in various parts of their life. For example, parents especially mothers have to work along with teaching children or even cooking. In fact, not only will parents run into a huge problem but also will lose their efficiency in order to complete their works in due time. Delving further into the issue reveal that invention and development of robots not only can patronize parents in their daily life but also can reduce their stress imposed by myriads of works. In other word, invention of robot and improving it not only will be cost effective but also will prevent parents from hiring assistant, which definitely do not have the effectiveness that robots have. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country; show that crowds of people have serious problem in which they should carry out their work simultaneously, which terminate into a stressful lifestyle. Indeed, robots will provide fertile ground for people to lead a healthy lifestyle and solve many problems.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that not only can robots work in a house but also can replace with workers in the companies. Broadly speaking, we all know that robots are intelligent and meticulous in their work. In fact, not only can they enhance the quality of products but also can save a hoard of money for the companies and cause significant progress in industry. To put it in other word, invention of robots can revolutionize people's life in which they can bring many advantages to the whole life in different realm. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, invention of robots can come up with serious drawbacks such as sedentary lifestyle. As a matter of fact, robots will provide an opportunity for people to stay in one place and monitor their life without any activities which can accompany with dangerous diseases. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, there are vast majorities of invention, which not only can help people but also preserve the planet and so forth. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that robots have an ability to do various works together which is useful for parents in their life. In addition, many companies can benefits from robots by replace them with workers in order to enhance their quality and gain a hoard of money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...ntroversial one is whether what kind of new invention can be helpful in the world. Agreement ...
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Line 1, column 605, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...tronize people in their life could have be the robots. In the following paragraph,...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240445859873 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.144904458599 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0764331210191 0.0866891130778 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0764331210191 0.046263068375 165% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0445859872611 0.0685040099705 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141719745223 0.118717715034 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0334394904459 0.0351676179071 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72733693167 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0238853503185 0.0309702414327 77% => OK
Particles: 0.00477707006369 0.00188951952338 253% => OK
Determiners: 0.0668789808917 0.0887237588012 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0398089171975 0.0209618222197 190% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0207006369427 0.0139019557991 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3466.0 2387.08602151 145% => OK
No of words: 577.0 408.028673835 141% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00693240901 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90110439584 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357019064125 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261698440208 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176776429809 0.174417080927 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131715771231 0.112833075102 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72733693167 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476603119584 0.524397521467 91% => OK
Word variations: 57.6661009728 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1923076923 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6534675427 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.307692308 120.699889404 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1923076923 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.576923076923 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 48.3621517131 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.5628742515 1.45489161554 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0120360859236 0.300154397459 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0932742744834 0.103427244359 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0785596259959 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.458856107037 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138349373156 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00529309499151 0.114077575197 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0133932674323 0.0781384742642 17% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.542604158448 0.336927656856 161% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.038544940696 0.067059652881 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00947863669555 0.210909579961 4% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101633651164 0.0618886996521 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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