If you could ask a famous person one question, what would you ask? Why?
If I could ask a famous person a question it would be whether they regret their career choice or not. Not all famous people are happy and wish they had a different career so as to avoid the drawbacks that come with being a celebrity. Others, however, thrive when they are the center of attention. I would like to know their thoughts on how their career affected their lives.
People choose to be stars for many reasons, ranging from high salary, fame or because they enjoy the work they do. Many famous celebrities are targeted by chasing paparazzi who are disrespectful of their boundaries. Although some celebrities can remain calm under such situations, some may feel uncomfortable when their privacy is invaded. There have been situations when celebrities got angry or had a panic attack due to the crowd of people screaming and taking their pictures without permission. I would like to know if famous people regret having the job they chose.
Other than this, well-known people are treated as though they are not human. They are expected to be perfect in every way. Not only do they have to meet beauty standards, but are also expected to make no mistakes when dealing with other people. For example, if a celebrity is in a rush and avoids meeting fans, the public would deem this behavior as arrogance and start attacking the celebrity on social media. These people are the prey of ‘trolling’ and ‘cancel culture’, even if their mistakes are trivial.
In short, I would like to ask celebrities if they regret being famous as their job requires them to meet unrealistic standards. They are expected to be faultless at all times and are susceptible to health problems and negative self-image because of the social pressure they have to bear.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Modern technology is creating a single world culture Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 73
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- If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study what would you choose Explain your choice using specific reasons and details 73
- A foreign visitor has to spend only one day in your country Where should that visitor go on that day Why Use specific reason and details to support your choice 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...py and wish they had a different career so as to avoid the drawbacks that come with bein...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...cause they enjoy the work they do. Many famous celebrities are targeted by chasing paparazzi who a...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty is in a rush and avoids meeting fans, the public would deem this behavior as a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88333333333 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60063881041 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7688797634 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5625 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102180522893 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426935883407 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803050939474 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743479920372 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548847522494 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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