If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed
Many devices and tools have been invented over the last centuries, making people's lives more comfortable and easier. With every year, new innovations appear, and some of them seem to be surreal because these surpass our imagination. If I would be able to develop a new product, I would choose a teleportation machine, because it would serve many causes. First, it would help in decreasing the environmental pollution, and second, it would be a good tool for saving time. I will explain my statement in the following example.
To begin with, modern machines and technologies have increasingly contributed to the fouling of the Earth. Almost all devices represent a source of pollution. For instance, automobiles and factories cause both air and noise pollution, which can seriously affect humans' health. Moreover, telephones, radios, televisions are also responsible for different ways of environmental degradation. But, a teleportation machine would resolve numerous problems humanity confronts with, because it would decrease the usage of fuel used by cars and industries. To continue, people would prefer to teleport themselves in order to discuss with somebody, instead of using phones or other devices.
Second, at present, people are living at an intense pace, because they have to deal with thousands of activities such as going to school, to work, dropping the children at school and taking them back, and solving various issues with different institutions and so forth. This means that they have to spend a lot of valuable time on the roads, in traffic, which is very stressful and harming for health. However, a teleportation machine offers some benefits regarding these aspects. First, every individual would be able to teleport wherever he wants, at work or at school, in just a few seconds. Not to mention that this would be less tiresome, and people could spend more time relaxing and recharging their batteries.
Third, Earth is a marvelous planet, which has many fantastic places to visit. Unfortunately, because of reasons such as money or lack of time, very few individuals can actually visit them. Anyway, by using a teleportation machine every person from every part of the world, could visit their dream places. In addition, humans would meet other people from different cultural backgrounds, which is a unique experience that contributes to self-growth and enlarges people's horizons and limitations.
To summarize, inventing the teleportation machine would be a revolutionary moment in the world's history. This is because it would enhance people's life from diverse points of view, and as a result, humans would be able to enjoy their short journey of life in a more effective and pleasant way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
...ortation machine would resolve numerous problems humanity confronts with, because it wou...
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Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
... would be a revolutionary moment in the worlds history. This is because it would enhan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, third, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2293.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28341013825 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88753072307 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566820276498 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0009207597 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.227272727 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86363636364 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136863931053 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412712732876 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444281947877 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831751471539 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453405208507 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.