If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed.
Although there are great number of inventions and devices nowadays, some of them don't really play any imperative role in our day-to day lives. If I were able to invent a specific device, that would be a machine which makes tremendous amount of electricity for domestic purposes. I will explain why that machine is essential and needed in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, numerous households pay incontrovertibly huge amount of monthly bills for electricity. The help of my invention would definitely lessen the financial burden of zillion families, consequently they can save considerable amount of money on other vital things like comestibles or clothes for kids. No one can deny that energy monopoles controls global prices and there is no power which can interfere. Accordingly, people who are below average class find extremely arduous, not to say impossible to tackle with enormous bills each month. For example, my grandmother's neighbors are old couple who have been retired for 8 years. Their monthly incomes solely in a form of pension barely cover all expenses. One winter day my grandmother told me how they knocked on her door and asked for help with some cash, owing to the fact that their electricity would be stopped if not pay. In fact, they crossed the deadline because they needed to buy medicaments which are crucial for their blood pressure and the money they dispose with, were not sufficient to pay the electricity bill in that cold winter times.
In addition, my new invention will be beneficial in terms of not instigating pollution to surrounding environment. As a matter of fact, it won't emit any greenhouse gases which are the main factor for global warming. Instead, my newly made gadget will produce electricity using magnetic field and sun. There is no shortage of opinion that almost all energy producers are harmful for our nature and copious evergreens and animal species are poised by breathing noxious fumes and by-products. When I travel to the city where my cousin lives, I often pass through a nuclear central building which is responsible for half of the electricity in the whole region. What I see is that incessant work of that building affect negatively all greenery in vicinity and every time I look at the area, there are withering trees and bushes poised by all gases and waste coming from all chimneys. If my device is going to be real, it would definitely solve the major issue and won't inflict the surrounding environment.
In conclusion, I believe that contemporary invention which I made will be beneficial to all citizens for two reasons. It would decline monthly bills for all families and extremely helpful for those who can not afford paying. Also, it won't be awry to any living organisms and plants as well humans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ions and devices nowadays, some of them dont really play any imperative role in our ...
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Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...hat cold winter times. In addition, my new invention will be beneficial in terms of not inst...
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Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to pay'.
Suggestion: to pay
...ly helpful for those who can not afford paying. Also, it wont be awry to any living o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, if, look, really, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2316.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96995708155 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72373986728 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570815450644 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 736.2 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3605117762 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1904761905 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90476190476 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0991230706735 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327887008033 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410640431503 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763827227234 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051522848897 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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