Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt. Explain your choice, using specific reasons and examples.
Each country has it's own customs and traditions based on a culture and religion. Typical for my country is when we go to someone's else house, to take of our shoes before we cross the threshold. I find that custom good and I would like that other people form various countries to adopt it. In the following essay, I will provide some supporting explanations why I feel this way.
First of all, when we remove our shoes before we enter someone's house we express respect and good manner. Popular for Balkan countries is to do that in every invitation, because we show friendliness and esteem toward our hosts. Consequently, we tighten a connection with the person who welcome us. Since that is a sign for respect and homage, we would expect to receive that respectively when we invite the same person to our dwellings. For example, when I was a kid my grandparents taught me to follow punctilious that principles owing to the fact that I would make a great impression for a well-educated kid. When I was invited to visit our close friend's house for the first time with my parents, I didn't forget to take off my shoes. As a result, the woman said to my parents that they have extremely well-manner kid with sanity. In this way I could show my respect toward people who take me to their sacred home.
In addition, that typical custom for my country in which people take off their shoes before entering houses is a great opportunity to keep the house clean. In terms of hygienic habits, it is critically important to keep indoor clean and tidy. However, that would not be feasible if we all enter with dirty shoes. Therefore, the custom appear as a solution to maintain cleanliness. There is no shortage of opinion that hosts won't be happy when they spend numerous hours in cleaning rooms and their guests enter the room with muddy soles. I will never forget when I was kid my mother has always told me to be careful where I go on streets and to not forget taking off my sneakers before enter. This in turn, helped me to create my habit and to be more attentive whenever I cross indoor area. That is old custom from many decades ago and if we had not adhered it, we would have find our houses full of dirtiness, bacteria and germs.
In conclusion, I believe that the custom which is famous in my country should be accepted in many other places overseas. It is because it will make people meek as they can express respect and homage toward their hosts. Also, all individuals would keep homes clean and sanitized. Hence, the people would no suffer from diseases and allergies
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...e for the first time with my parents, I didnt forget to take off my shoes. As a resul...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at opportunity to keep the house clean. In terms of hygienic habits, it is critica...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
...if we had not adhered it, we would have find our houses full of dirtiness, bacteria ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55291576674 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47100280407 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490280777538 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4927075152 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2916666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135952601096 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049789251091 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691185856918 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12139108622 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686450756554 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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