If you could meet anyone who has ever lived, who would you choose to meet? Describe this person and his or her accomplishments. Then give reasons why you would like to meet this person. Support your answer with details and examples.
Famous people have a tremendous impact on our success and well-being. They have a great influence on our behavior and beliefs. Therefore, if I could meet a person who has ever lived, I would choose to meet Mahatma Gandhi. He was an Indian activist, at the time that he has lived, he has had a great influence on many people, he was the leader of an Indian group. I would like to meet him for two important reasons which I will discuss in the following essay.
To begin with, Gandhi is the example of wisdom. Indeed, he has influenced the behavior of many Indian people, the major part of<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> Indian people have</span> liked and admired Ghandhi . For example, when the country has faced an obstacle or conflicts with other countries or economic related obstacles, he was able to solve any of these issues in a proficient way by his wisdom, smartness and wide variety of knowledge. most of the people at that time have agreed about his decisions because they believed in him. Hence, he has raised India to the highest level of knowledge and smartness in solving their problems.
Moreover, Gandhi has had an indelible role to establish peace. In fact, he refutes any thoughts related to wars or violence, he was always encouraging people to find ways far from aggressiveness. For instance, when many countries at that time have tried to start fighting and violent conflicts with India. He always has tried to calm down the situation and convert it to civil war. Consequently, he has stabilized and spread peace not only in India but he has influenced many countries world-wide.
For the aforementioned reasons, I would definitely like to meet this person because of his wisdom and peace related beliefs. I want to learn more from him and sharpen my personality. Hopefully more people will follow his way and learn from him.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87697160883 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87372523819 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536277602524 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2889475649 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139744611819 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540520367823 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110375139272 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990497834303 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814590934804 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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