If I could study a subject that I have never had the opportunity to study, I will choose to study Taekwondo. I will tell you three reasons to explain why I chose this.
First, taekwondo is good for dieting. The most important thing when students study is physical strength. Therefore, it is very important to build up physical strength. Taekwondo is effective in building physical strength and it is also very good for making a pretty body. For example, my friend was very fat, but after learning Taekwondo, she lost 10 kilogram in three months. So I really want to learn Taekwondo.
Second, Taekwondo allows me to protect myself. There are so many crimes these days and they are becoming more dangerous. Therefore, I think self-defense is more important than studying, especially for girls. In fact, I have seen a woman on the news who almost got kidnapped and ran away in self-defense. So, I felt the need for Taekwondo more.
Third, Taekwondo also teaches manners. Korean people considered etiquette as the number one priority because they had always valued Confucianism. Therefore, Korean traditional taekwondo values manners. Taekwondo has this characteristic, so you can see the attitude of respecting the rival even when greeting before the start and doing Taekwondo. Thus, I think Taekwondo is the best sport among sports.
This is why I chose Taekwondo. I think Taekwondo is the most attractive subject because it is effective in dieting, protects my body and teaches manners.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 352, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilogram' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilograms'.
Suggestion: kilograms
...t after learning Taekwondo, she lost 10 kilogram in three months. So I really want to le...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, third, thus, for example, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 246.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06504065041 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83549916637 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.245774917 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3 20.6045352989 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1287890086 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402385335695 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920898713841 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109955454187 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169059651685 0.0645574589148 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 352, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilogram' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilograms'.
Suggestion: kilograms
...t after learning Taekwondo, she lost 10 kilogram in three months. So I really want to le...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, third, thus, for example, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 246.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06504065041 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83549916637 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.245774917 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3 20.6045352989 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1287890086 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402385335695 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920898713841 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109955454187 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169059651685 0.0645574589148 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.