If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
I strongly prefer to select the introductory book about my country culture. It should be noted, that the selection of a particular thing that represents my country, as far as I concerned, cannot be limited to one scope. Being one of the most proliferated social issue in the tourism attraction category, an exhaustive description of the culture can be referred as a hot subject in all exhibitions. In addition, as current social researches reveal, the culture involves all prominent matters presenting the foundation, believe, communication and monuments of the country. In other words, regarding the fact that the culture can be implied as core nature of all countries, finding the appropriate thing to reflect this subject is quite difficult. Thus, to my best knowledge, an introductory book which associated with numerous pictures can be implied as a perfect choice. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, the introductory book for the exhibition can involve some chapters which describe separate subjects. For example, the first chapter may include the geographical characteristics of my country; second chapter can represent the history, the foundation, and the believe of my country based on the archaeological excavated findings and social investigations; third chapter may involve the most attractive monuments and interesting places for visiting; and finally, the last chapter can denote the best souvenirs of my country. Thus, the most necessitated elements of the culture can be presented via the introductory book.
Another primary of reason of my selection can be contributed to the critical role of all book as a portable thing. Considering the time limitation to describe all important characteristics about my country culture, an introductory book with appropriate size can be useful for all audiences who have the time limitation in exhibitions and can study the book in their free time.
Aside from the point I made above, the use of appendix's pictures in the introductory book which concerns the country culture characteristics plays a critical to impress people effectively. It is obvious that the power of picture to indicate the core element of special scope and play a complementary role in conjunction with the text of the book can put noticeable emphasis on the readers.
To recapitulate, I strongly incline to take the side of my selection representing an introductory book about my country culture as the best thing for the exhibition. Although, there are different things to select such as special art products, handmade souvenirs, and some particular foods, in my best knowledge, none of them can be indicated as a substantial thorough matter as the introductory book.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, third, thus, for example, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35079726651 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19403615314 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48291571754 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 746.1 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.9563925827 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.8125 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4375 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0783722934723 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344180957079 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298670280991 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516913654232 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246963559723 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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