If your friend wants to reduce living expenses, which would you suggest?
1. Find a roommate that can share the living expenses.
2. Buy the new technology products less frequently.
3. Shop for less expensive food and cooking at home
Currently, with the process of inflation, an increasing number of commodities’ prices are continuously rising, which cuts in students’ budget and requires them to reduce their living expenses. Some individuals reckon that it is a preferred choice to purchase newly-emerging products less frequently due to skyrocketing price at emergence, while others contends that cooking at home can help us to reduce extra cost. Personally speaking, I harbor the idea that the optimal option to reduce living expenses is finding a roommate to share the accommodation fee for reasons as follows.
To start with, finding a roommate is capable of reducing living expenses in a large extent. Nowadays, due to the sizzling economy, the rent fee, together with the prices of flats is continuously increasing, which imposes more burden on citizens, therefore, the rent fee takes up a large part in a student’s monthly cost. Provided that a student can find a suitable roommate, half of the rent fee is saved, which significantly enables students to lower the cost. Compared to that, the newly-emerging products, although the price of which is extremely high, avoiding purchasing new technology products is not conducive to reduce living expenses since it accounts merely a little in our living cost. Meanwhile, it is impossible for us to shop for less expensive food and cooking at home to save money. Specifically, although it seems that cooking at home is capable of saving money spent on paying fees for labor force working in restaurants, taking the the fees of electricity or other consumption, especially the time we devote to it, it is much expensive than purchasing food from restaurants.
What’s more, it is economical to share a flat with a roommate. To be more specific, sharing a house with a roommate, both of them can save a lot of money besides the rent fee, for instance, the fees of electricity, potable water or other affairs shared by them, which, in a large extent, ameliorates their financial situation. Apart from that, living with a roommate also contributes to our safety. Due to the ever-rising crime rate, it is inconvenient and dangerous to live alone without accompany of any friends or family members. Hence, provided that there is a roommate living with us, it can ensure that we can help with each other when we are confronted with potential attacks. Meanwhile, in case of emergence, such as migraine, pneumonia, cardiovascular diseases, a roommate ensures that we can be sent to adjacent hospital to receive instance curing instead of staying at home and being plagued with pains. In the contrary, living in a fast-paced society, it seems impossible to decrease the frequency of buying new technology products, since it is the most intriguing affairs that we human beings want to talk with others upholding the same interests in advanced technology. Additionally, the society full of competition also exerts negative influence on our health, thus if we choose to purchase less expensive food, it is likely to do harm to our physical health. And sometimes since we are usually occupied with countless work and school assignments seems impossible to achieve.
Admittedly, reducing the frequency of purchasing new products is beneficial for us to diminish needless money in living expenses and cooking at home also plays a crucial role in cutting costs, nevertheless, taking the disadvantages of those approaches, the perks of these two methods are outshone by the merits of sharing a flat with a roommate.
In a nutshell, from what has mentioned above, I would like to reiterate my opinion that I prefer to suggest my friends to reduce monthly cost through finding a roommate to share the rent fee since it is economical and efficient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for instance, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 103.0 52.1666666667 197% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3157.0 1977.66487455 160% => OK
No of words: 615.0 407.700716846 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97987886753 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02552037631 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 212.727598566 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492682926829 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 999.9 618.680645161 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7277360021 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.85 100.406767564 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.75 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35882044368 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109934736127 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692770743882 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20574418084 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611249728945 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 11.7677419355 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 86.8835125448 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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