It goes without saying that in this sophisticated and radically progressive era in which we live, all human beings have always been involved in a great struggle to find lots of information about different topics in the media such as television, radio, newspaper and the Internet. Whereas some individuals debate that looking for the places in the Internet is a great idea to get familiar with those locations, on the other side of the continuum, stand others, believing that in order to take a great vacation and experience a nice place, people should talk about the destination to persons who have visited there before. As far as I am concerned, I categorically concur with the first mental attitude. In the ensuing essay, my perspective will be perspicuously substantiated by the underlying and conspicuous reasons.
To begin with, it is no secret to anyone that with this great rate of technological advancement, all people are able to achieve lots of information about different subjects just by searching of a word on the Internet. Under such a circumstance, a person can easily read the other person’s experience and standpoints toward the subject. Consequently, that person enables to make a rational decision based on his observations and knowledge. An example can shed some light on this subject. Several years ago, I decided to have a trip to Asia. My friend told me that Malaysia is a great country because there are several grand hotels, casino and beautiful beaches there. However, when I searched on the Internet and got information about Singapore, I discovered that this place is a much better country in comparison to Malaysia because most of the people who visited Malaysia before mentioned that this country is very crowded and its beaches are dirty. Therefore, if I chose my destination based on my friend’s opinion, I would have not enjoyed my trip.
Moreover, one of the most exquisite points is that by searching on the Internet, a traveler can observe the photographs of the best locations in different countries and also become familiar with the best hotels, national parks, and beaches. In such a situation he can easily make his decision individually and other person’s points of view do not impact on his decision.
This issue is a really momentous and paramount factor because each person has a different perspective and maybe the other person does not like it. An example can drive this notion dramatically home. In the aforementioned points, my friend told me that Malaysia has a fantastic hotel with lots of amenities. He mentioned that this hotel has an interesting gondola lift which has a great lookout to the sea. However, when I say some photographs related to that hotel, I found that his comment is not accurate and you are able to watch the lookout only for one minute. Besides, I did not like to watch the sea or ride a gondola lift on my trip.
In conclusion, taking into account the aforementioned reasons and examples, I am of opinion that when a person decides to travel to a new location, reading about the place is more significant than discussing someone who has visited there. This is because there is much information about any topic on the Internet and also, people’ opinions do not affect your decision negatively
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, whereas, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2745.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 551.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98185117967 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9339228238 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488203266788 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 882.9 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6466120371 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.772727273 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0454545455 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31818181818 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138584344015 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348408282301 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431863446434 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083542493901 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05729915289 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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