Students should have their own preference to broaden horizons. Some say that
we can take a course is no direct to connect with our major course, while others claim that we can do some volunteer work at hometown or university city to absorb different experience. Of course, I do not deny that choosing different course can enhance our professional ability. However, I am afraid that such ability is only broaden our knowledge from book not a useful tools. In the following, I will describe to take part in volunteer works are beneficial for future career and self-confidence.
First, volunteer work can improve to gain career experience. Take my roommate Ann for example, she wants to be a nurse and her major is medical treatment. One day she told me that she want to participate in the medical organization in Africa for two month practicing. This short-term medical volunteer work can directly work at their hospital and nurse patients. Although people may consider to gain the career experience is not need to go this dangerous way. In Ann’s opinion the experience is worth for her to see different way of life there and to be more understand her career planning.
Secondly, volunteer works can also useful in assist disaster resident and rebuild their hometown. Take earthquake for instance, the accident was occur seriously in Tainan couple of years ago. One of the building dump suddenly in the midnight. Lots of resident compel to separate with their family. The tragedy also need enough people to give them assistance. Besides medical treatment, volunteer can join to prepare food for them and give some teach resources to accompany with their children. Although most students may argue about this volunteer work do not have any beneficial for their own and a little intermeddle at the situation. In fact, if we can switch our thought, these assistance can give you a sense of pride and identity. The better we feel about ourselves, the more likely we feel positive and confidence.
In sum, students can bring these experiences to find out their preference career and have confidence to devote their effort on people who needs help. In my perspective, volunteer work is a training for student to do the work which really different from their class. Therefore, this experience can totally learn to improve yourself enrichment.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: n.fattahi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'practicing' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'practices'.
Suggestion: practices
...al organization in Africa for two month practicing. This short-term medical volunteer work...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...k at their hospital and nurse patients. Although people may consider to gain the career ...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
...er to gain the career experience is not need to go this dangerous way. In Ann's...
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Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'occurred'.
Suggestion: occurred
...rthquake for instance, the accident was occur seriously in Tainan couple of years ago...
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Line 4, column 676, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this assistance' or 'these assistances'?
Suggestion: this assistance; these assistances
... In fact, if we can switch our thought, these assistance can give you a sense of pride and ident...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in fact, of course, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03084832905 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75195173425 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529562982005 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4985685027 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0869565217 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9130434783 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.34782608696 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149744298905 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422264119777 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434839987687 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902514144189 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191015851203 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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