Internet
Internet makes a significant modification through its worldwide general uses. Personally admit that internet based technologies fulfilled people’s routine lifes, and it has its own consequences on nations which I believe are positive and helpful to facilitate world. Flourishing aspects such as eases ordinary tasks, Improves friendships and interactions amongst people and academic development for different groups of people.
Internet was a gift to help people do their personal duties readily. They can provide many things like supermarket stuffs, take a cab, order foods, arrange a vacation to more important one like find a plumber or register universities online. Novel technologies let families to monitor their kids, pets and houses long distance by online applications. Instead of stuck in traffic, waiting in long market’s lines or exhaust because of too much outdoor activities from early morning till evening, you can save time and energy by doing these items by net. To sum up you can manage your life easier and more delightful through internet use.
Internet helps be in touch with others more frequently. No way could you have a video call with a friend in europe. Nowadays there are internet applications that let you video call, send pictures and other stuffs by just one click with negligible cost. You can have more interactions with people in a day, since many use social medias and post there. Internet terminates distances as everyone can have dealings to every location in the world online. In conclusion you can communicate better with presence of internet.
Academic’s lifestyle improved by online features. A researcher accesses a ton of data online now, and shares his investigation to others more quickly worldwidely. There is a availability to access up to date resources easily. Therefore, the velocity of academic development increased after use of internet.
One of the most helpful factor that enhanced people’s lives is internet. You have an online assistant to organize your ordinary tasks and help you in every occasion. Now you do your old assignments promptly and many old severe works now look easy by internet.
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| 2023-07-21 | Take | 70 | view |
| 2023-06-08 | Vivian Chang | 70 | view |
| 2023-06-08 | Vivian Chang | 70 | view |
| 2023-06-02 | Atharva_Bhide1808 | 80 | view |
| 2023-05-27 | danielkim736 | 60 | view |
- Altruism 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age. 60
- Truth 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- Some people think that parents should plan their children’s leisure time carefully. Other people believe those children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, Which idea do you agree with?Give reasons for your choice. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which I believe are positive and helpful to facilitate world. Flourishing aspects...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hers more quickly worldwidely. There is a availability to access up to date resou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3556851312 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94988413671 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63556851312 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2784940351 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4761904762 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7619047619 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311755617439 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115242884031 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113043360833 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181675927606 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496185422989 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.