Internet in today's era is considered the hub of knowledge and information. In my opinion, internet does provide us with huge loads of information on variety of topics. I feel this way due to certain reasons that I will explore in my essay.
Primordially, there is no denying that kids are much more smarter these days due to internet. They have access to such huge chunks of information so easily, that they explore their interests in a variety of fields. This opportunity was not available a few decades back. People would communicate with each other and try to get information which was not a very reliable source and chances of spreading wrong information always existed. In contrast, today people knew since young what they want to become and what things they are interested in. The availability of information has saved a lot of time and helped in development of many people of variety of background.
In conjunction with that, information is a very powerful tool. Internet has helped us all get this information readily and helped us in a variety of ways. For instance, during the pandemic when the schools were shut and people were terrified to go out to buy books. Through the access of internet many people attended their classes successfully and there was not much space for backlog.
In contrast, I would agree that people might have a very divergent point of view than what I have. I acknowledge that there are disadvantage of anything that is given in excess. Certainly there is lot of unnecessary information readily available on internet which would dampen the productivity of the person. There are huge distraction present where a person without guidance can easily be lost.
In a nutshell, I strongly feel the pros outweigh the cons. There have been more advantage to people in general than loss by the presence of huge chunks of information. At the end, it is up to the individual to use it in a productive and healthy manner.
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- TOEFL T P O 11 Integrated Writing Task 52
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'smarter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: smarter
... there is no denying that kids are much more smarter these days due to internet. They have a...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of view than what I have. I acknowledge that there are disadvantage of anything ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for instance, i feel, in contrast, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85928143713 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80777191615 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523952095808 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4516540126 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.15 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21910122221 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608595108028 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059494182656 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114087708574 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059890687773 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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