In my opinion, it is better for children to follow their parent jobs and choose a job like to them jobs. I am so eager to say a few words about my point of view.
One of the primary reasons is that parents can help their children in finding job. They passed the ways for finding this job many years ago, so they have a open eyes in this way. For instance, my friend decided to be dentist like her father last year. She could employ in very famous hospital in only 3 months after graduated. It happened because her father introduce his for hospital boss, which he worked there and she did not need any other recommendation in employing process.
There is also a more subtle point we must consider. The children who continue their parent jobs are more successful in compare with children who have a different job from their parent. They obtain their parents experiences about that job within a very short time. For example, my friend and her mother are chief. She started this work 1 year ago and now she is one of the best chiefs in our city. Undoubtedly, it was impossible in this short time without her mother’s guidance.
What is more, I would say that parents and children understand together very well in this condition. For example, I continued my mother’s way and now I am a doctor. When I come back to home after hard work or after surgery, my mother make home quite for me to rest. My mother understand me because she experienced conditions like this during her works.
All in all, if all the factors are contemplated, we can reach a conclusion that finding job similar to parents job help the person to reach good results very fast because this way had been flat via parents for the children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...conditions like this during her works. All in all, if all the factors are conte...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in my opinion', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229885057471 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.140804597701 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0632183908046 0.0866891130778 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0574712643678 0.046263068375 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.117816091954 0.0685040099705 172% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.126436781609 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0201149425287 0.0351676179071 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46762308244 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0229885057471 0.0309702414327 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0747126436782 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014367816092 0.0209618222197 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.014367816092 0.0139019557991 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1723.0 2387.08602151 72% => OK
No of words: 311.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54019292605 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.27652733119 0.338922669872 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.1961414791 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.122186495177 0.174417080927 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0739549839228 0.112833075102 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46762308244 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549839228296 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 57.9029207183 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2777777778 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7526413595 48.84282405 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7222222222 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.644075263715 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 36.8919256877 45.7405998639 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.19090909091 1.45489161554 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350848856556 0.300154397459 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0668869798361 0.103427244359 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0397537580884 0.0752933317313 53% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.468353124244 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173904347407 0.151897553556 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108873963159 0.114077575197 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123004579698 0.0781384742642 157% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.228143553076 0.336927656856 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0750999766984 0.067059652881 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21911258864 0.210909579961 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110454676963 0.0618886996521 178% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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