Choosing an opportune job is a compulsory course for each adult and thus receives much attention globally, the process of which usually involves numerous details and are extremely critical to your further lifetime. It is accepted by some people that children should better pick jobs similar to their parents, but personally I don’t regard that it could impose uniformity in all cases.
Admittedly, sharing similar jobs with parents does provide sort of convenience. It is quite low-cost for such children to acquire essential nutrients for their personal developments due to kinship, such as basic skill trainings, proper educational resources, abundant career experiences as well as enlarged social circles. Compared with guys who cannot acquire these advanteges and must pay strenous efforts to gain that, these children already attain sharp competitive edges in the fierce competition of the job enrollment market. However, it is an exaggeration to say that staying in parent’s area is always wise. If parents’ jobs do not match children’s own personality, this idea will become extremely excruciating.
Compared with convenience created by bloody relationship, where children’s own interest and talents lie in matters more. As an old saying goes, curiosity is always the best teacher, which implies that people choosing a career that they are interested in are more likely to become successful. Take the children's world well-known musicians for example, like Beethoven, Mozart and Paganini, their children are able to play some musical instruments but their professional achievements are never comparable to that of their parents, though they were suffused with classical tradition since an extremely young age. Rather than family atmosphere, it is one’s unique curiosity and capability that act as enduring driving forces to explore the unknown world. Choosing a job matching their own situation, the children are more likely to realize career development.
Moreover, the payment also deserves considering. Parents’ jobs do not always ensure financial independence in the next generation. My roommate Jessica, whose parents are both broadcasters,does not decide to continue on the same job, due to the fact that almost nobody still listens to radio nowadays and this job could only bring about extremely moderate income, which is not able sustain all the expenses of foods, clothes,rent, vehicles, utilities, credit cards and so on. Therefore, from myperspective, a job without a decent pay is not worth considering.
To sum up, children should not always choose jobs similar to their parents’. Besides the convenience due to blood relationship, children’s interest and gifts as well as monetary rewards hould also be taken into account. After all, finding jobs is a complicated and pivotal process that more factors need to be taken into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, sort of, such as, as well as, in all cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76488095238 4.8611393121 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19883715895 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669642857143 0.524837075471 128% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.7110700406 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.941176471 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482036248137 0.236089414692 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151289308884 0.076458572812 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115714468815 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267838833156 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469471811448 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 10.9000537634 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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