Choosing an opportune job is a compulsory course for each adult and thus receives much attention globally, the process of which usually involves numerous details and are extremely critical to your further lifetime. It is accepted by some people that children should better pick jobs similar to their parents, but personally I don’t regard that it could impose uniformity in all cases.
Admittedly, sharing similar jobs with parents does provide sort of convenience. It is quite low-cost for such children to acquire essential nutrients for their personal developments due to kinship, such as basic skill trainings, proper educational resources, abundant career experiences as well as enlarged social circles. Compared with guys who cannot acquire these advanteges and must pay strenous efforts to gain that, these children already attain sharp competitive edges in the fierce competition of the job enrollment market. However, it is an exaggeration to say that staying in parent’s area is always wise. If parents’ jobs do not match children’s own personality, this idea will become extremely excruciating.
Compared with convenience created by bloody relationship, where children’s own interest and talents lie in matters more. As an old saying goes, curiosity is always the best teacher, which implies that people choosing a career that they are interested in are more likely to become successful. Take the children's world well-known musicians for example, like Beethoven, Mozart and Paganini, their children are able to play some musical instruments but their professional achievements are never comparable to that of their parents, though they were suffused with classical tradition since an extremely young age. Rather than family atmosphere, it is one’s unique curiosity and capability that act as enduring driving forces to explore the unknown world. Choosing a job matching their own situation, the children are more likely to realize career development.
Moreover, the payment also deserves considering. Parents’ jobs do not always ensure financial independence in the next generation, which means the life quality of theirl children would ceritainly be impacted if they are forced to step into their parents' career. For example, my roommate Jessica, whose parents are both broadcasters, does not decide to continue on the same job, due to the fact that almost nobody still listens to radio nowadays and thus this job could only bring about extremely moderate income. Without a reasonable monetary reward, how to sustain all the expenses of foods, clothes,rent, vehicles, utilities, credit cards and so on? Therefore, from my perspective, a job without a decent pay is not worth considering, which would inevitably decrease the satisfaction of virtually every aspect in the daily life.
To sum up, children should not always choose jobs similar to their parents’. Besides the convenience due to blood relationship, children’s interest and gifts as well as monetary rewards hould also be taken into account. After all, finding jobs is a complicated and pivotal process that more factors need to be taken into consideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to consider'.
Suggestion: to consider
... Moreover, the payment also deserves considering. Parents' jobs do not always ensur...
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Line 7, column 606, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , rent
...stain all the expenses of foods, clothes,rent, vehicles, utilities, credit cards and ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tually every aspect in the daily life. To sum up, children should not always ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, after all, for example, sort of, such as, as well as, in all cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2703.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57319587629 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02990795661 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 837.9 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3840342251 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.15 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452173790979 0.236089414692 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137410397495 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114995975144 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26080556854 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287661179374 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 86.8835125448 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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