it is better to choose a job with a high salary even though they do not like that job.
Agree or disagree
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that individuals have to strive and thrive hard to gain higher status in the world. Vividly, with the modernization of the world people's living standards are extremely skyrocketed. In this regard, jobs and employment are of paramount importance which provides the people a source to achieve their goals and dreams. there are different schools of thought amongst scholars, whether the person needs to choose a job which is low salary but provides them happiness, or he contemplates their needs first and chooses job which provides them a high salary but they do not like doing it. If I were asked, I would subscribe to the letter idea. I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first reason coming to my mind to elucidate my standpoint is associated with the notion that in this advanced world where people have contemporary lifestyles it is arduous for individuals to accomplish their wishes and needs at a low salary. they might enjoy doing their job but that will lead them to be unhappy and unsuccessful in life. On the other hand, a person who is earning a high salary could easily live a comfortable lifestyle where he not only attain his life's dreams but also provides for his family. It is axiomatic that after all these efforts, his bond with his family members grew stronger and his life would be filled with pleasures. My example is a compelling example of this. Five years ago, I was doing a low salary job but it was the job that I loved most, as an artist. I could not provide enough for my family and my relationship with them deteriorate as a result. Then, last year I switched my job to a high earned salary job but not what I loved most. surprisingly, my relationship with my family members got better as I could fulfill their demands, and it brought joy to my life as well. It is crystal clear to see why high salary jobs are important in life.
The second reason behind my rationale is rooted in the fact that when a person is getting a high salary from a job, he remained dedicated to his job. It is noticeable that a person would work hard to keep his job and have a good impression on his boss. Therefore, he worked toward building relationships with his colleagues as well. Ultimately, this all will leads to his prosperity and success. For the sake of illustration, my brother is working for a company that is paying him a high salary. My brother was not a hard worker, but just because his company provides him with incentives and increments, he motivates him to work hard and try to be good in colleagues and his supervisor's eyes. If his company had not given him a high salary, he would not have motivated to work effectively.
BY perusing the above paragraphs, one can infer that doing a job that you love entails the feeling that you never worked, but the monetary value and high salary is critically important in life. For the sake of brevity, few points are reiterating. First, high salaries will serve the purpose of fulfillment of an individual and his loved one's needs. Second, it will motivate him to work strenuously and become successful at work. As for the writer's opinion, I vehemently urge people to choose a job that provides them a high salary as it ultimately brings happiness to their liveS.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, after all, as for, as a result, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 90.0 43.0788530466 209% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2733.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 589.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64006791171 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92639038232 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68044127108 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463497453311 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 860.4 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8649083045 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6071428571 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0357142857 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284705493595 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819145456223 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876758094756 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193718730666 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511405015982 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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