Is it better to focus on maths and science rather than humanities in school education?
Chapter 4.
4. Schools should focus more on science and mathematics than on humanities courses
In general, the focus in the schools is the most important issue to be considered in the education system /point/ because it can change the structure of the scientific community sts and simple workers of the next generation. There are people who think that schools need to accentuate the hard sciences such science and maths more than humanities. courses. Yet I strongly believe that they In turn, I think in school programs there must not be any accents, and all kinds of courses need to be taught in the same way without any exceptions.
First of all, not all kids have the same abilities in maths and science. That is why, it is unfear to force them learn maths and science. Moreover, there are children who are good in languages, arts, and other majors, and it will be disaster to make them change their preferences. For instance, one of my friends is a talented linguist, but at the same time she has no abilities in learning maths.
Another reason why schools need to avoid making accents in their educational programs is that they should not force children to study what the administration thinks is better for children. Furthermore, forcing children can harm their psychological health. Children must be free in their choice, and the school should help them to chose what they want to become when they will grow up, and to force them. For instance, when I was a child in our school there were not any accents and we were free to choose, and now, I am sure, there nothing had changed since my childhood, and schools simply need to help children to choose their own way.
And the last reason why the schools must avoid forcing children is the fact that without humanities courses after some years the country will have a lack of lawyers, linguists, and other specialists. Moreover, I cannot imagine a state without Ministry of the Foreign Affairs. For instance, one of the best ministers of Foreign Affairs in the modern world is Sergey Lavrov the minister from Russia, and he has an education not related with maths or science.
All in all, schools need to avoid any kind of suppression. Moreover, the schools need to be the places where children have equal chances to choose among different courses and become what they want.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...science and maths more than humanities. courses. Yet I strongly believe that they In tu...
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... help children to choose their own way. And the last reason why the schools must...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in general, kind of, of course, first of all, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50345775206 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486419753086 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.86738351254 643% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7649198722 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.9375 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3125 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237386962129 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700881449777 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861374010036 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151235336366 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119429116869 0.0645574589148 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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