It is better to have friend who are intelligent than to have friend who have a good sense of humor.
It goes without saying that friends are the most important part of our lives. there has been a controversial debate among people who are interested in having a good friendship as to whether making friend with smart and genius people is more beneficial than making friend with those having a sense of humor. From my perspective, it is better to have friend who is funny, and two reasons to support my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, people having a sense of humor will help us to have a better mental and even physical health. It is not a secret to anyone that humans are inclined to communicate with their counterparts to share their feelings. Having a friend making us laugh is one of the biggest boon that we can have in our lives because a funny friend creates enjoyable and memorable moments, meaning we will be able to get rid of our stress and problems. According to an article conducted in my country when humans feel happy the concentration of Adrenalin will increase in blood, which is significantly helpful for humans’ mental health. To put it in more vivid picture, my best friend is Zeynab I have been friend with her for more than 9 years, she is so funny and makes me laugh even in serious and hard situations; before I met her I did not enjoy the living since I was alone and preoccupied with a lot of thoughts. However, now she has rejuvenated my soul, I feel satisfied with my life since I feel happy. Had I not met my best friend, I would probably get depression. As you can see, a happy and funny person as a friend is necessary for all people since they can get rid of stress and feel happy during the life.
Furthermore, having funny friend, people are more likely to be successful in their future. It is crystal clear that those who can make others laugh have a great deal of confidence because they are not afraid of being humiliating they are able to speak in front of people without being nervous, which is one of the most important characteristics of successful people who can state their real feelings and opinions openly. Obviously, it is crucial to find good and funny friends as they can influence us in different ways; therefore, people will unintentionally obtain their friends’ traits and they will become more confident and self-esteem individuals, which means they have one of the most necessary social skills, they can thereby communicate with other people conveniently and it is more likely to find a decent job and have better relationship with different people. So they will enjoy better personal and professional growth.
In sum, not only will people having funny friends enjoy better mental health, they will also be more successful individuals in their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
... interested in having a good friendship as to whether making friend with smart and genius peo...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'friended'.
Suggestion: friended
...om my perspective, it is better to have friend who is funny, and two reasons to suppor...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...successful individuals in their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, as to, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73794549266 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67291569008 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454926624738 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.410488538 48.9658058833 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.25 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8125 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368122477478 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14001649467 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115418136283 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273130798353 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119060851382 0.0645574589148 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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