It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Today's people can go to another city easily with the highly developed transportation systems, like highways, airlines, railways. Therefore, many people choose to move to another city for living rather just for travelling. From my perspective, I prefer this way since living in another town is going to push you to explore more possibilities and live an more interesting life. I will explained the detailed reasons in the following paragraphs.
Firslty, it's no doubt that a fresh environment can force people to jump out of their comfortable zones. You may have bought your breakfast in the same shops for over twenty years without changing. However, moving to another city is certain to force you to explore all the restaurants providing the breakfast along the streets where you live in. Then, your would find appealing shops and make new friends with people buying the breakfast as you. Furthermore, a new city, maybe a metropolitan, can provide you with more working choices. Many of my classmates in the high school decide to enter a university in metroplitans, like Beijing and Shanghai, far from their hometown since those cities with a more developed finance having more big companies like Huawei and Baidu. Those companies recuit a large amount of graduated students every year and provide a reasonable wage. On the contrary, if they stay at their hometown, they may not be able to find a suitable job with the same salary since those local companies don't have the same capacity to employ so many people.
Secondly, you can live a more interesting life if choose to live in another city. Not the mention the different sceneries in a new city, different kinds of food can already give you a wonderful experience. Under the most circumstances, people living in different area prefer to eat different kind foods. For example, people living in the north part of the China prefer to eat noodles while people living in the south of the China intend to eat rice. In addition, there are many featured snaps in different cities, such as menzi in Yantai and Regan noodles in Wuhan. Those diversly tasty food can catch your stomachs and make you enjoy in living there. Besides, those different sceneries also can feast your eyes. For instance, I used to live in an coastal city and was accustomed to enjoy the sun light on the beach. However, after a long time, I would not like to enjoy the time lying on the beach since it can't give me fresh experience any more. After moving to Wuhan, riding along the green roads with lush trees fills out my rest time again, which I hadn't experience before the moving. That really makes my life more colorful.
It's admitted that living in the same city is more comfortable, moving to another city contribute to your sustainable development nevertheless.
To conclude. I believe that moving to another town at some time is a better choice for a peron's development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 351, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... to explore more possibilities and live an more interesting life. I will explained...
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Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'explain'
Suggestion: explain
...d live an more interesting life. I will explained the detailed reasons in the following p...
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Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...n the following paragraphs. Firslty, its no doubt that a fresh environment can f...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...same salary since those local companies dont have the same capacity to employ so man...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...r eyes. For instance, I used to live in an coastal city and was accustomed to enjo...
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Line 5, column 770, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to enjoying'.
Suggestion: accustomed to enjoying
...used to live in an coastal city and was accustomed to enjoy the sun light on the beach. However, af...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...oy the time lying on the beach since it cant give me fresh experience any more. Afte...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...s fills out my rest time again, which I hadnt experience before the moving. That real...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2416.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88080808081 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61990683913 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513131313131 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 770.4 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8852745321 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.64 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213474499406 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061908366535 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684750593907 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160943983728 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552011574033 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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