It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's sophisticated world, cities and the places where people live are of paramount importance. With this in mind, some people prefer to live in the town where they were born for their whole life. However, living in different places would be better. This way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, living in different towns will broaden peoples' horizons. It is well established that open-minded people will promote society's development so that all society members will benefit. In this regard, it is the responsibility of all society members to provide themselves with first handed experiences. When people move from one town to another, they will gain some precious experiences. In different cities, the residents and their way of life are other from their original town, and they can encounter different people and acquire some valuable knowledge from them. They also can familiarize themselves with different ideas, which assists them in thinking outside of the box. In this situation, their brain ability will be enhanced. Of course, this open-minded person will be beneficial to improving society.
Moreover, living in different cities helps people find their best positions. Finding a suitable place to live will directly enhance their quality of life. Imagine a person born in a small town or graduated from university, but there is no proper job in that city. In this situation, s/he has no choice but to move to another city with more job opportunities. For this person moving to another town will be like a miracle because it can change their life. S/he will secure a job, earn money and make a decent living for themselves. On the other hand, if this person does not leave their town, s/he would not have any chance to catch a job opportunity to improve their quality of life.
To sum up, Given the reasons mentioned above, living in different cities is beneficial to people. This is because not only will their horizon widen, but also they will find the best suitable place to live on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, of course, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98837209302 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57743777921 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502906976744 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1459693327 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.7142857143 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.380952381 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179231278166 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655949428563 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464886162154 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121823205721 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210234988117 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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