it is better to relax by reading a book or watching a movie than doing physical exercise
Currently, the society has witnessed an unprecedented accumulation of material affluence, hence the citizens are offered with multiple choices of entertainment or approaches to relax, like reading a book, watching a movie or doing physical exercise. A myriad of individuals reckon that reading a book or watching a movie is a better option, while others prefer the alternative of doing sports. Personally speaking, doing exercise is a terrific option and there are a couple of reasons to account for my view.
To begin with, there is an increasing number of citizens leading a sedentary life, which drives up the morbidity of a bunch of diseases intertwined with the lifestyle, especially depression caused by the great pressure from the daily grind. Under the irreversible propensity of the possibility of having fatal diseases, doing regular physical exercise are conducive to tackle the issue from its roots. To be more specific, individuals are sedentary or even isolated from the outside environment, which impedes them from relieving their stress with an appropriate outlet. However, doing physical, as an approach to relieve pressure, is capable of rejuvenating individuals from the overwhelmed pressure generated in the sedentary and stressful works. The research conducted to evaluate the employees’ preference on the approaches of relaxation indicates that they are more interested in doing exercise due to its effect both in relieving pressure and keeping healthy. Hence, factoring the sedentary lifestyle into consideration, doing exercise is beneficial for citizens to rejuvenate themselves.
What’s more, it is also cost-effective to do sports. With the ever-rising fund distributed to develop the infrastructures, there is an increasing number of gym emerging in some metropolises, which are usually without charge. Hence, individuals choosing to rejuvenate themselves in the newly-emerging gyms can get rid of their daily grind and refresh themselves by stretching their arms and legs without any extra expense. For instance, one of my best friends, Rebecca is fond of going to the public gym to do exercise, where she can not only relieve her burden by stretching out but also share her annoyance with her friends hanged out with her. Consequently, as the saying goes, a problem shared is a problem halved, Rebecca is not plagued with her stress after work out in the gym. This example conveys the idea that doing exercise can effectively address the baffling problem of stress with an extremely low charge.
Admittedly, reading a book or watching a movie has a couple of merits. For instance, reading the novel stories involved in a book can uplift our mood, or the romantic plots displayed in the movie probably inspire us to pursue a new relationship. Nevertheless, these kinds of solution cannot enable us to break the cycle of the sedentary life and what the ramification they are likely to lead is cervical disease. Meanwhile, since these two solutions are based on fabled stories, their effect of relieving pressure is not long-lasting and reliable.
In a nutshell, weighing the pros and cons, it is a terrific approach to do exercise instead of reading or watching a movie, since doing exercise gains a competitive edge over its double effect and cost/gains the upper hand due to its double effect and cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2817.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29511278195 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05783278055 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516917293233 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 897.3 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.260186819 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.85 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292832041934 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944321721203 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106588216217 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184940958441 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134237139287 0.0645574589148 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 86.8835125448 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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