By and large, there is no doubt that the career people chooses has tremendous effect on their lifestyle. There are a plethora of people who are in conviction that a secure job, though low paid is far better than an unsecure job with high paycheck, while others take an opposite point of view. To the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, I accord with the second group. Among countless reasons which give adherence to my opinion, I will delve into the most important ones in what follows.
First of all, the standards we consider to choose our career can directly affect our lifestyle. A low paid job requires a smaller house or even an old one, so that the rent can be afforded. These sort of treatments can easily alter the self-image, one holds to itself about his individuality. For instance as I turned 19 I choose to take my chances in a big company with a fat paycheck. Though I was almost sure that in future everything could easily be torn apart, but in the end who knows for sure if I was to be alive for another day or not. The high salary kept me motivated and I was enjoying every second of my time there. I was able to live a full life and spend my time in the most luxurious buildings in the city. My self-esteem was improved substantially and so was my ambitious. I got fired in the end, but the courage I got in that place and the assurance that it's not far fetch to live more conveniently and more lavishly, stuck with me for the rest of my life.
Secondly, one has to take the risks in order to soar upward. There is no nobility in poverty and for that one has to take any chance that can so as to succeed. My friend for example was working for a small company with low payments. Assure from his job security, he didn't follow his dreams since he was too afraid to seemed ridiculous for me, how he was nagging about his boss all day long behind his back, but wasn't ready to give it a shot and try something that though not stable but could result success. Higher standards, stem from courage. And a mediocre lifestyle is an outcome of faltering in a dead end job which will bring you alienation and nothing more in the end of the day.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the fact that in order to be more satisfied with our lives, we have to take our chances and try what promotes us. A low paid job will not only bring you depression in the end but can also lower your lifestyle standards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider choosing'.
Suggestion: consider choosing
...ollows. First of all, the standards we consider to choose our career can directly affect our life...
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Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'These nulls'?
Suggestion: This sort; These nulls
... one, so that the rent can be afforded. These sort of treatments can easily alter the self...
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Line 2, column 502, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt, but in the end who knows for sure if I was to be alive for another day or not...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...hat one has to take any chance that can so as to succeed. My friend for example was work...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ments. Assure from his job security, he didnt follow his dreams since he was too afra...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
... boss all day long behind his back, but wasnt ready to give it a shot and try somethi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in short, no doubt, sort of, by and large, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31086956522 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43407889675 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517391304348 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5810032689 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4285714286 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9047619048 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199426161152 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588747864369 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780932834168 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146223904874 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633411706782 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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