it is better to work in group which have similar idea rather than which have different ideas than us
In student life, we have to do some projects whether independently or in group. These tasks can make students more experienced. Although the plethora of people holds the opinion that it is better to work with people who can share our ideas and opinion, I believe that it is great to work with people have different thinking than us. I feel this way because of following reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, by working with people who have different opinion, one can get multiple ideas, which can be useful in group projects. A group can easily and proficiently finish their task with the help of each other. For instance, four students get tasks to do research in environment study. If everyone has dissimilar ideas, then it will be easy to them to collect different data. This can useful to make a unique project, because it has included different thoughts.
The second and equally exquisite proof for this assertion is about learn new things from partner having different ideas. To learn new skills from other people are also useful in work. For example, in office there is a huge project which is given to the one of the group of the office members. They have different designation, so they can easily finish the work which is related to them. Generally, they do not have chance to learn different work from each other, so this chance is best for them to learn different skills.
However, By working with people who can share our ideas can cut down the arguments among members. If people have similar thinking, then it is easier to them to take decision about project. In opposite point of view, sometime working in group with people having different opinion is not beneficial too. To illustrate this, different people have not similar thoughts, so they often do arguments in projects, which may lead to bad consequences.
By the way of summary, based on above arguments, I think that it is better way to work with people who have diffrent opinion. The different ideas can make one strong topic. Besides this it is also helpful for each member, because they can explore with new suggestions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8152173913 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45834267831 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467391304348 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5183246875 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.380952381 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5238095238 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32231832108 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974650303879 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703325055064 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200037224474 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061445620355 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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