Considering the tremendous impacts of a shopping center, I will strongly support the construction of this lucrative project in my neighborhood. The impacts of a shopping center is profound and well-known to encourage economic development, create employment, improve security, and provide easy access to finished goods. The following paragraphs will delineate my claims on why building a shopping center is tantamount to the aforementioned economic importance.
First and foremost, shopping centers are an aid for economic development. Shopping centers are paramount in ensuring economic development exists in any nation, they create national prosperity by paying tax and meeting other governments monetary conditions. Some shopping centers installs basic amenities such as borehole which provides its environs with constant water supply and electricity. By providing enough electricity, the security of the populace in that environ is guaranteed.
Second, shopping centers creates employment. Unemployment is increasing daily with the population of many nations. In order to solve this national crisis, many of the world's most unemployed countries have resorted to building shopping centers. Employment is created when skilled individuals are employed as workers in this shopping centers, this helps to promote national unity and reduce crisis caused as a result of unemployment. In addition, small scale businesses such as road side hawkers will also be able to sell their goods to customers who visits the shopping center, this means the rate of poverty will also be reduced.
Third, shopping centers provides easy access to finished goods. Most often the scarcity in products lead to people migrating to places where they could easily get access to them. By constructing shopping centers, goods will easily be available and citizens will eliminate the cost of having to travel to far distance locations in order to get access to them. This act will save money and enhance citizens welfare.
To recapitulate what was earlier said, constructing a shopping center will help in raising the standard of living in my neighborhood and I will be stolid in ensuring such a project is constructed if asked of my opinion. My decision is built entirely on the economic importance this exciting project will bring to my neighborhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Considering the tremendous impacts of a shopping center, I will strongly suppo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, third, well, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57223796034 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01467811762 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555240793201 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8027230241 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.277777778 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166022427417 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591567085378 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408590027548 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984176817405 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334070959991 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.