A movie theater in a neighborhood may be considered as a nuisence to some and great form of pastime for others. To me, if a movie theater is opened in our area it would positively benefit the local people in various ways. Hence, I would support the plan of openning a movie theater in my neighborhood.
First, movies are great form of entertainment. It helps us to fill our leisure with fun and helps us to think outside the realm of mundane. So, the new movie theater would attract the local people and provide them a unique opportunity which was not available to them before. When I was a child, I and my friends were particularly fond of adventure movies. But we did not have any movie theater in our area. As a result, we couldn't watch the latest movies and had to depend on the old VHS tapes. If we had a movie theater in our area, we could have spend our leisure time watching movies and being immersed in the latest and greatest adventures of silver screen. Opening up a new theater in the neighborhood would give that opportunity to the local people.
In addition, movies are not only a form of entertainment but also a medium for learning. As a learning medium, movies are particularly versatile because traditionally we see them as just pastime. We can learn about societies, histories, science and even morality from well made movies. Some movies provoke thoughts about our actions and their consequences. Some movies depict the horror and sufferings of wars. For instance, one of my favorite movies is Saving Private Ryan which is based on war. It shows us that war is not all about glory and we have to pay great price in this situation. So, my neighborhood would benefit greatly from a movie theater as it would enrich our knowledge by showing movies like this. This is one of the main reason for my support to the plan.
Finally, a new movie theater would also help the neighborhood economically. It would attract people from all over the town and thus it will increase the influx of visitors in that particular area. To take advantages of it, small businesses might be set up around the theater by the local people. Also, the movie theater and the businesses will create jobs and help the unemployed to find employment. When I was in high school, I used to seek opportunity to work part time and the movie theater would provide this opportunity. This benefits also provide reasons to support the plan.
A good movie theater with modern amenities and showing well chosen, thought provoking movies is highly beneficial for a community because of the above reasons. That is why, I fully support and would like to see the plan of building a new theater in our neighborhood materialize.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ie theater in our area. As a result, we couldnt watch the latest movies and had to depe...
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Line 3, column 549, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ovie theater in our area, we could have spend our leisure time watching movies and be...
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Line 7, column 463, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ool, I used to seek opportunity to work part time and the movie theater would provide thi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.145038167939 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0553435114504 0.0866891130778 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0496183206107 0.046263068375 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0782442748092 0.0685040099705 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110687022901 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0324427480916 0.0351676179071 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67248978547 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0286259541985 0.0309702414327 92% => OK
Particles: 0.00381679389313 0.00188951952338 202% => OK
Determiners: 0.108778625954 0.0887237588012 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.030534351145 0.0209618222197 146% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00954198473282 0.0139019557991 69% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2707.0 2387.08602151 113% => OK
No of words: 477.0 408.028673835 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6750524109 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310272536688 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238993710692 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.123689727463 0.174417080927 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0880503144654 0.112833075102 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67248978547 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452830188679 0.524397521467 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.0353346149 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0357142857 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9575379768 48.84282405 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6785714286 120.699889404 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0357142857 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.464285714286 0.644075263715 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 40.9350853549 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.44055944056 1.45489161554 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23043474964 0.300154397459 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10648970643 0.103427244359 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0636049413989 0.0752933317313 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.472207821447 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134253743639 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092760751556 0.114077575197 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672334869155 0.0781384742642 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.371393982295 0.336927656856 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.072258904908 0.067059652881 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184992372957 0.210909579961 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492314522564 0.0618886996521 80% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8870967742 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 21.0 8.42114695341 249% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 27.0 13.6433691756 198% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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